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First Dawn

Legends about the beginnings of time have kept people mesmerised for many millenia The galaxies exsisted long before humans came on the scene They will continue to exsist after we are gone Countless generations have chased after the ultimate knowledge Perhaps the answers we seek like within our fragile forms The inner world is a microcosm of the vast cosmos There is more depth in us than is commonly realized! Let comets pass by with their firey tales we will not be without hope even at the end of all things For our short stay on earth will be crowned with blazing light if we keep ourselves ready for the answers which dawn has offered us since the beginning way back before the globe we live on first began to spin around that ball of light we name the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/17/2011 10:16:00 PM
Very well written. Inspirational and story like. You might try an epic. Add the immediate emotions and actions to the story. It'll give your poems more depth, even tho they're already good.
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:04:00 PM
It is still a delight to read this one, Matthew! So well done! The imagery and where your thoughts are taking the read are beautiful, hopeful and inspiring. Thank you also for your nice review of my poem. Love, Caroline.
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Date: 6/11/2011 4:29:00 PM
Indeed in your sight a day is like a thousand years, i believe in the Bible it is written..
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Date: 6/11/2011 4:25:00 PM
Most expressive piece here Matthew, its good to open the mind, pleased to read your words..!
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:10:00 PM
Very great way of expressing the idea..Enjoyed your work..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2011 7:14:00 AM
very informative ! Such a beautiful presentation . If you wish to read my cultural collaboration with Michael Wayne then check with his profile the poems title is ' across the globe ' . Thanks and regards
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:26:00 PM
lovely creative write Matthew full of wonderful imagery and a strong intro .. an amazing view of your thoughs of futuristic intensity luv..
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Date: 6/6/2011 4:50:00 PM
Well done, Matthew, and yes, the answers are within us, but sometimes we need to hear them from outer to have them resonate with our inner being. Great job with this write! Thanks for sharing and thanks for the comments on Spring-Fest. I don't know if you saw my soupmail to you about publishing. I did send you one. I am done with the book after many a editing. So now, I have to deal with the publishing face. Still thinking of self publishing. Love and peace to you too, Caroline.
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