First Date

It's awkward and strange,
and if I had to sum it up
in about four words
They would be

My mom was driving.

Not romantic, just weird.
And when we got to the movies
mom went to the other side of the theater
realizing her presence on my first date was
ridiculously embarrassing

We didn't really talk to each other
I didn't know what to say
and you didn't either.

And I don't really remember much of the movie
because what I do remember is your arm
around the back of my seat
an inch away from direct contact

I'm sure you eventually recovered
some feeling in your arm
in a few years, I bet.

On the way home
it was equally silent
and equally awkward

And our relationship
didn't work out
but I hadn't really expected it to

So here's my hint to you, kids.
Just don't go on a first date
with your mom in the car.

~~~~~
Written for the contest: First Date
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:45 AM
hahaha here is one with a great LESSOn inside it! Congrats on a great win. I love this.
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 3:37 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Marie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Congrats Marie on your super second place win in first date with this delightful write luv..
Brown Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Marie. Love, Carol
Arthur Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:44 AM
Thats funny
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