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First Date

I met him in the town's local cafe A young adonis working the railroad line. Long blonde hair, eyes so blue, with a strong muscular body too. He asked me to meet him the next day Agreeing, this became our first date A local fair was in town that day Hand in hand we made our way. Together we climbed a high hill To watch the horse races run He leaned over and kissed me long My heart went flop and it was done. Young hearts giving it a try a few moments between a young girl and guy That first kiss from this golden child All thoughts began to run wild. It ended at the fireworks that night He was leaving with the morning light The first kiss, remembered forever The first date an extreme pleasure. for Carol's contest 07/08/11 Phyl

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Date: 9/2/2011 2:44:00 AM
I sure remember this awesome little poem. WEll, if you were asking me my birthdate, it's the fifth. In the US,that is Labor Day and it's a special one for me this year. Labor Day falls only on MOnday and I was born on a MOnday and so it's not too often that my birth date matches up with Monday, the Labor DAy holiday. As for the breathing thing. I did it for a month and never saw results, even when I was not overeating!! It actually worked for you??
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:48:00 PM
Awesome write lovely Lady....with love.....old Jack
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:41:00 PM
Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 7/16/2011 5:03:00 AM
So nice to see you win!!! I couldn't remember my first date? Light & Love
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Date: 7/15/2011 7:32:00 PM
WOWIE, First place!!! And you make it sound Marvelous, Phyllis. I really like this one of yours.WAY TO GO, sweetie!!! And thanks so much for all your comments to me today. Always appreciated. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:35:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Phyllis
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Phyl on your first place for first date ..with this sweetly penned entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Phyllis. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:24:00 AM
A beautiful memory and a beautiful poem. Very nice imagery. Great styuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:45:00 AM
How beautiful, Phyllis, I could see it all unfolding, this must be a winner in the contest and thanks so much for re-visiting one of my older poems today, I had forgotten that one, and you know, I need to read it often myself, as a reminder of what is important in this short time we have in life. love~~
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Date: 7/12/2011 6:54:00 PM
Ahhh, my first experience going to the campgrounds ! Oh yes, fond, fond mems ! TY for this one Phyllis ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:01:00 PM
very romantic, well written and so creative.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:42:00 AM
truly delightful to read Phyl and a sweet version of first love ..first kiss ...first date.. and then.. letting go...oh... lovely rhyme..simply beautiful my friend.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:15:00 PM
What a wonderful date this must have been. I love the way you describe your first kiss from the "golden child." Ah, passion is so great in youth. Excellent poem, Phyllis. Wishing you success in Carol's contest. Have a wonderful week ahead. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2011 1:27:00 PM
wow how HOT! didn't know you had it in you ;) ;) I can't seem to remember mine [pout] Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2011 12:13:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Phyllis. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 10:55:00 AM
Great work that reads like a sure winner..Good luck in that contest..That first date kiss reads like it was terrific..Sara
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