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First Date

First date Can't wait Go slow Love grows Too fast Won't last So weird He leered Nice try ~ Said bye

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2020 12:55:00 PM

Now I have to go to the toilet.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/27/2020 12:35:00 PM

I've had one or two first dates like that - no second chance for them!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/27/2020 5:18:00 AM

quick date! sassy fate

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2020 7:07:00 PM

Excellent! Not the date...lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2020 4:32:00 PM

hey is there a footle contest going on?? This is third one I saw today!! Well done, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2020 6:40:00 PM

As far as I know, Andrea, there's no footle contest. The three of us are just 'playing footsie.' lol. Take care, Gershon

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 6/25/2020 1:32:00 PM

Ah! Yes. I remember it well. Thanks for the memory, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2020 6:39:00 PM

Picking up on your comment, Geoffrey - Now that I've penned this footle, I remember this 'slow/fast' aspect of dating too. Thanks for the kind words! Warm wishes, Gershon

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 6/25/2020 11:50:00 AM

Outstanding, Gershon! Very witty and tells a tale! Glad you are picking up on the footle type of verse - press on! Bob H

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2020 1:13:00 PM

Heh, heh: Want to play footsie, Bob. Oh, I know. Tough guys like us don't play silly games. Trix are for kids, too! Have a Great Thursday, and thanks for your enthusiastic comments! Peace in Truth, Gershon

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2020 6:46:00 AM

So adorable. Love it! God bless you always and happy writing dear friend. Love and prayers, Gina

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2020 6:08:00 AM

it's beautiful.....just love it.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/25/2020 4:30:00 AM

Hopefully he learnt from his mistakes, it's a trial and error thing. Tom

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/25/2020 1:33:00 AM

lol..Too much said with too little words.. You footle is a delight to read.. Have a great day Gershon..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/25/2020 12:12:00 AM

It all depends on the girl/woman - she will guide the relationship - some first dates cant wait to jump into bed but others will take it slow easy and naturally even if it takes a month or two - if I was a man I would know who woo! True words expressed in this write Gershon - well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.