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First Dance

first dance 
we sashay into the depths
of our modesty


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Visual # 4

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Scott Thirtyseven

April 1, 2015 at 11:45 AM

Excellent

Hija De La Luna

April 23, 2015 at 1:49 AM

thanks, Scott!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 12, 2015 at 6:25 AM

- Beautifully haiku, Hija - I wish you a lovely day ! - I do not know what / where you have won ---- but, congratulations! (I not included in the contest :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hija De La Luna

March 13, 2015 at 8:36 AM

thanks, Anne! Wish you a beautiful day!

Casarah Nance

March 11, 2015 at 5:29 PM

nicely done, grats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 9, 2015 at 1:05 AM

I love your unique interpretation of the picture, Hija...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

March 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

HI HIJA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Hija De La Luna

March 8, 2015 at 7:05 PM

Thanks a lot, SKAT! ??

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 11:54 AM

Hija, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna

March 8, 2015 at 7:06 PM

Thanks much, Linda! Glad of ur visit!

Joseph May

March 7, 2015 at 3:37 PM

Congrats on a fine win Hija

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:13 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

Jan Allison

March 7, 2015 at 2:45 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Hija:-) Hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:13 PM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs back :)

James Fraser

March 7, 2015 at 2:45 PM

Love the message in your words Hija, hugs, James :)

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:18 PM

glad you loved the message, James! Thank you!

Kim Shaw

March 7, 2015 at 8:27 AM

Congratulations on the win, Hija! Beautifully written. Hugs, Kimberly

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:18 PM

ThanK you, Kimberly, for finding this piece beautiful! Love and light!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 7, 2015 at 5:44 AM

Congrats hija...

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:21 PM

Thank, Rajat!

Kp Nunez

March 7, 2015 at 12:41 AM

Congrats my crazy beautiful friend! Love your romantic haiku! 7 from me too...hugs and smiles from your crazy lovely friend...:D

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:23 PM

My crazy lovely friend! Delighted here that you love this haiku and a 7 rating coming from you..wow! Thank you..hugs and smiles and winks for you!!

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2015 at 12:29 AM

coming back to tell you how much I adore that word Sashay!

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:27 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Love how it sounds and the image it creates, too!

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2015 at 11:35 PM

This one is so great, Hija!! it is such a clever way to address the 'first dance" of a virgin! Congrats for your win in my contest. hardly anyone chose visual four.

Hija De La Luna

March 7, 2015 at 8:26 PM

Andrea, such a sweet recognition from you! Thank you so much! It is always a delight knowing you find beauty in my words. Owe you a lot for the inspiration! God bless!