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First Dance

first dance 
we sashay into the depths
of our modesty


3.3.15
Visual # 4

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/1/2015 11:45:00 AM

Excellent

Hija De La Luna
Date: 4/23/2015 1:49:00 AM

thanks, Scott!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2015 6:25:00 AM

- Beautifully haiku, Hija - I wish you a lovely day ! - I do not know what / where you have won ---- but, congratulations! (I not included in the contest :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/13/2015 8:36:00 AM

thanks, Anne! Wish you a beautiful day!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:29:00 PM

nicely done, grats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 1:05:00 AM

I love your unique interpretation of the picture, Hija...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:16:00 PM

HI HIJA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 7:05:00 PM

Thanks a lot, SKAT! ??

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:54:00 AM

Hija, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/8/2015 7:06:00 PM

Thanks much, Linda! Glad of ur visit!

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2015 3:37:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Hija

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:13:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:45:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Hija:-) Hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:13:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs back :)

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2015 2:45:00 PM

Love the message in your words Hija, hugs, James :)

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:18:00 PM

glad you loved the message, James! Thank you!

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/7/2015 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Hija! Beautifully written. Hugs, Kimberly

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:18:00 PM

ThanK you, Kimberly, for finding this piece beautiful! Love and light!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 5:44:00 AM

Congrats hija...

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:21:00 PM

Thank, Rajat!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/7/2015 12:41:00 AM

Congrats my crazy beautiful friend! Love your romantic haiku! 7 from me too...hugs and smiles from your crazy lovely friend...:D

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:23:00 PM

My crazy lovely friend! Delighted here that you love this haiku and a 7 rating coming from you..wow! Thank you..hugs and smiles and winks for you!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:29:00 AM

coming back to tell you how much I adore that word Sashay!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:27:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Love how it sounds and the image it creates, too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:35:00 PM

This one is so great, Hija!! it is such a clever way to address the 'first dance" of a virgin! Congrats for your win in my contest. hardly anyone chose visual four.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/7/2015 8:26:00 PM

Andrea, such a sweet recognition from you! Thank you so much! It is always a delight knowing you find beauty in my words. Owe you a lot for the inspiration! God bless!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 11:19:00 AM

beautifully penned Hija good luck in the contest:-) Hug Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/3/2015 11:11:00 AM

O I can feel. GL hija>>love>>>rajat