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Again it commences, the scene, inside my head, Throughout the night and throughout the day This chaotic drama starts to play; Once more the curtains open, to bring my dread. If only I had spoken less, or even more, Perhaps the beginning would alter the end Even a cause and effect could bend; And the results would be a different script-score. To squeeze out the light, to despair and to cry, Is the last line in this my theatrical part There is no pain, like this pain of my injured heart; And my broken wings hold my dreams as they fly. "Be Inspired Poetry Contest" Enclosed Rhyme. 06/08/20. sponsor Regina McIntosh.

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Date: 8/6/2020 4:20:00 PM
Hello Janine Lever, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Heartache does hurt badly. Yet in time we get stronger. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2020 9:51:00 AM
Hello Janice Well i do hope you win this is a great poem. I have had heartache to in my marriage. on a trip we visited his family friends. it was there he cheated on me.I will never know why he passed away 4 years ago. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Janine Lever
Date: 8/7/2020 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. I wrote it for the contest, which was about a picture to inspire the poetry. Its not about me, but I have had that kind of despair long ago, so I was inspired to write it, when looking at the picture, in remembrance of what it felt like, and how others may also experience the same. And yes,it too did pass. Thank you for your comments and the welcome. I love Poetry Soup.

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