First Contest

First contest

Nice to congratulate me
About my new little rhyme
That won honorable mention
Lady informed me, so kind!

How I even got noticed
What was written on a whim
First time in poetry contest
Thrilled I got a little win. 

It’s given me confidence
Gonna continue to write
Willing now share my poems 
Way I think hope you’ll like.

Always so surprised when find
Thoughts tumble off my pen
Who knows... maybe once again
Have another little win?

Barbara. Barry- Nishanian
Jan, 5, 2018. Copyright
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DiMino Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Congratulations! I write that way myself--sit there, let them begin tumbling out, onto the paper, and then become a passenger as well as engineer. Writing is as much mystical as it is everything else.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 3:17 AM
"Become a passenger" very well expressed. I understand this when I paint...but almost frightening to read what I've written some times...because poems are not about my life. I'll try to post tomorrow.."Innocence Taken" Scares me I wrote this... no my pen did. Love to get your comment. Hope content not to dark. bbn If get courage to post please be frank.
Talbot Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Hi Barbra, Keep writing, you'll always be a winner with me!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Oh Mick..How encouraging.. I'm gonna keep trying. Glad you stopped by. bbn
Raynes Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:13 PM
yep, let ur pen do the talking, love getting recognition in the contests for the writes, nice.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Desire for recognition...is better still as an approval to continue to try to become writer of poetry. As told Silent One every one's manner, or form of writing introduces and draws me deeper into forms beyond rhyme which I love. You "Emotional war"...Wow! Thank you for your time to check me out.bbn
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:41 AM
Great poem about contests, hope you write for more and get so many more placements..
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Somehow read Janice Canerdy comment before G.R.Barden's that's how I found out I'd won. Your comments and others are as satisfying as awards, especially after reading your poem, Happy! You teach me by the form's your familiar with...Thanks bbn
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