First Call After a Terrific Fight

After a long interval...
When I heard your well-modulated calm voice 
through the phone receiver saying "HELLO"
Just a moment~ I blinked my eyes to recognise 
the tone..
As soon as I recollected our last argument,
I felt an ultimate shiver in my heart 
it was as though electric power was circulating 
throughout my body
Heart beat thumping very rapidly.,
Perspiring continuously ---- 
brooding over past..
guessing the reason for this sudden call..
without responding ,Still I stood.
Emotions kept progressing untill I heard that 
One word " Sorry " from "you"...!!!
  When I finally heard it ,
Was back to "normal zone" in my life..

24-7-2020

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Date: 7/24/2020 5:42:00 AM
I felt this. Viscerally. Well writ! My best to you in the contest Deepa, xomo!
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/24/2020 5:48:00 AM
Thankyou for feeling it viscerally mo mam:-) Thanks for the appreciation and encouragement too:-)Much love
Date: 7/24/2020 1:44:00 AM
Nothing like words to reassure you and put you at ease Tom
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Date: 7/24/2020 2:45:00 AM
Hello Tom sir, That one word could be anything in an committed relationship;-) So that word put me at ease.Okay anyways..if you felt my work incomplete ..Will mention some word in my work:-) Have a lovely day.Take care. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
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