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First Call After a Terrific Fight

After a long interval... When I heard your well-modulated calm voice through the phone receiver saying "HELLO" Just a moment~ I blinked my eyes to recognise the tone.. As soon as I recollected our last argument, I felt an ultimate shiver in my heart it was as though electric power was circulating throughout my body Heart beat thumping very rapidly., Perspiring continuously ---- brooding over past.. guessing the reason for this sudden call.. without responding ,Still I stood. Emotions kept progressing untill I heard that One word " Sorry " from "you"...!!! When I finally heard it , Was back to "normal zone" in my life.. 24-7-2020 Note:STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (13),any form, any theme Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/24/2020 5:42:00 AM

I felt this. Viscerally. Well writ! My best to you in the contest Deepa, xomo!

V. Deepa
Date: 7/24/2020 5:48:00 AM

Thankyou for feeling it viscerally mo mam:-) Thanks for the appreciation and encouragement too:-)Much love

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/24/2020 1:44:00 AM

Nothing like words to reassure you and put you at ease Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 7/24/2020 2:45:00 AM

Hello Tom sir, That one word could be anything in an committed relationship;-) So that word put me at ease.Okay anyways..if you felt my work incomplete ..Will mention some word in my work:-) Have a lovely day.Take care. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)