First Breath After Death

I used to live, within a dream
a small cog in the consumer machine
materialism dazzled, with an intriguing gleam
I wanted so much, I nearly burst at the seam.

Then I awakened a voice inside
which promised to take me on a much greater ride
I wasn't sad....when the old me, he died
It was with joy not sorrow, I sat there and cried.

A second chance, I'm born again
alleviation of all of that pain
I've been cleansed, by a conscious rain
which opened the Pineal bit of brain.

I felt alive, but I acted dead
I took little notice of anything said,
Now, I find my own truths instead
spoken by a voice inside my own head.

The transition was mightily fast
27years changed, after one night had passed
I never knew I was only flying at half mast
thinkin' I was winnin' but really comin' last!

But truth's not heard
if you walk with the herd
can't fly freely, or soar like a bird
if you believe, every single damn word.

The message which now flows through me
is filled with a positive and sacred Divinity.

I swam the sea of despair, as if it wasn't even there
I crossed the abyss of wisdom, on a shaky rope bridge
I sipped from the fountain of knowledge
and I drank it dry, I now feel really high
why don't you give it a try? Kiss that old life goodbye,
Life's so much better, after you die!!


A poem by John-Ovan.P.Hull to be entered in the Coming of Age poetry contest.
©John-Ovan.P.Hull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 2, 2012 at 9:14 PM
JOHN... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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February 28, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Hope you did all enjoy, I enjoyed writing that one, I've still not managed a 1st place..yet...will try harder!
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February 27, 2012 at 5:43 PM
[shiver] it's a bit frightening what it takes to get us to enjoy life. Congrad's Light & Love
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February 27, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest John-Ovan. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Facinating and unique poem. Congratulations on the win.
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February 27, 2012 at 9:30 AM
congrats John on an outstanding win for this creative write luv..
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February 21, 2012 at 11:15 PM
John, wonderful write, from start to finish. I especially liked the last stanza. Wonderful. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe
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February 23, 2012 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Samual, I was trying to end it on an inspiring tone, looks like I achieved it :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:54 PM
congrats John on an HM for this brilliant poetic art luv..
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest John-Ovan. Love, Carol
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