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First Breath

Don't remember my first breath But surely will remember my last whatta mess Maybe shot in a gang fight Or by a jealous lover in spite Or maybe shot by an opponent playing chess

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Date: 12/17/2019 10:43:00 AM
Gang fight? I suppose you have that Capone look lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2019 11:38:00 AM
No... actually a Santa look!!!
Date: 12/17/2019 10:24:00 AM
Check your mate for weapons... ;), xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2019 11:37:00 AM
LOL!!! Funny! We just never know do we! XOXOX

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