First Breath

Don't remember my first breath But surely will remember my last whatta mess Maybe shot in a gang fight Or by a jealous lover in spite Or maybe shot by an opponent playing chess
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Gang fight? I suppose you have that Capone look lol
Ellison Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 11:38 AM
No... actually a Santa look!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Check your mate for weapons... ;), xomo!
Ellison Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 11:37 AM
LOL!!! Funny! We just never know do we! XOXOX
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