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First Attempt

As challenges go, it's a toughie can't think what i'm doing it for really not sure if this will turn out well only I've never tried this before. Some poets efforts on this website triumphantly put mine to shame I'll hope for a score of a two, maybe four can't get seven for something this lame!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/18/2016 4:57:00 PM

I think you did this very well. You are willing to try and put some (like me) to shame. I don't even try. Too much work.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/19/2016 11:44:00 PM

Give it a go,Duke, you'll surprise yourself. Regards, Viv

Gavin Joachims

Date: 6/17/2015 1:06:00 AM

Hi mate, I guess, we get what we ask for:) I loved these lines. Very brought smile on my face and poet's heart. TEMPTED for a 7 :) , but I give you a 6 just the same. Regards and well done, Gavin

Viv Wigley
Date: 6/17/2015 2:47:00 AM

Thanks, Gavin, very kind. Have a good day. Regards, Viv

David Furlong

Date: 3/3/2015 1:09:00 AM

Well not from me Viv. I would give it six and half at least for the effort you have put into this poem. It brought a smile to my face and laughter inside, what more could one want. Well done ...keep it up.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/3/2015 7:19:00 AM

Thanks, David. Reinforces my opinion of the jolly nice people on this site. Regards, Mister Viv