First Attempt

As challenges go, it's a toughie
can't think what i'm doing it for
really not sure if this will turn out well
only I've never tried this before.
Some poets efforts on this website
triumphantly put mine to shame
I'll hope for a score of a two, maybe four
can't get seven for something this lame!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Beaufort Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 4:57 PM
I think you did this very well. You are willing to try and put some (like me) to shame. I don't even try. Too much work.
Wigley Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Give it a go,Duke, you'll surprise yourself. Regards, Viv
Joachims Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Hi mate, I guess, we get what we ask for:) I loved these lines. Very brought smile on my face and poet's heart. TEMPTED for a 7 :) , but I give you a 6 just the same. Regards and well done, Gavin
Wigley Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:47 AM
Thanks, Gavin, very kind. Have a good day. Regards, Viv
Furlong Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Well not from me Viv. I would give it six and half at least for the effort you have put into this poem. It brought a smile to my face and laughter inside, what more could one want. Well done ...keep it up.
Wigley Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, David. Reinforces my opinion of the jolly nice people on this site. Regards, Mister Viv
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