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Firmament Radiance

Firmament radiates with celebration glow midst sparkling kaleidoscope whisking vibrant cheer lights leaping, lilting, skipping in whirling flow like flowers blooming above unfold fireworks clear. Midst sparkling kaleidoscope whisking vibrant cheer bursting brilliantly as tints and hues of gems’ flare like flowers blooming above unfold fireworks clear praising God for His goodness*, wafting festive air. Bursting brilliantly as tints and hues of gems’ flare lights leaping, lilting, skipping in whirling flow praising God for His goodness, wafting festive air firmament radiates with celebration glow. *Psalm 107:31 Oh that men would praise the LORD for his goodness, and for his wonderful works to the children of men! January 12, 2021 8th place, "2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 7" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Mark Toney; judged on 7/15/2022.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2022 1:39:00 PM

Beata, love your "leaping lights," "hues of gems," and "bursting brilliant tints and hues!" You have really captured the grandeur of God's magnificence! Congratulations dear friend. Blessings to you on "leaping lights" of grace.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/17/2022 5:21:00 AM

Beata, I've never put my own poetic mind to writing a pantoum thinking its rules must surely stop the flow and spontaneity of a piece. You've proved me wrong here with 'Firmanent Radiance'. This comes together and works so well. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest. Cheers - Gary

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/16/2022 9:18:00 PM

Dear Beata, your praiseful poem amazes with glorious imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Watt

Date: 7/16/2022 1:08:00 PM

Beata, thank you for sharing this poetic display of God's glory, radiating throughout his firmament, and congrats for your win! Grace and peace ~ John

Mark Massey

Date: 7/16/2022 7:38:00 AM

A vivid display of writing Beata, the pantoum is a difficult style for me…but this one is well delivered. Congrats.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/15/2022 1:37:00 PM

A Fourth of July to celebrate and remember Beata. How lovely this is. Congratulations on your great placement. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2022 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day......................

Mark Toney

Date: 7/15/2022 8:26:00 AM

Beata, we are grateful for your lovely Pantoum of praise! Congratulations on your win on Mile 7 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 8 has already started!