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Firmament Radiance

Firmament radiates with celebration glow
midst sparkling kaleidoscope whisking vibrant cheer
lights leaping, lilting, skipping in whirling flow
like flowers blooming above unfold fireworks clear.

Midst sparkling kaleidoscope whisking vibrant cheer
bursting brilliantly as tints and hues of gems’ flare
like flowers blooming above unfold fireworks clear
praising God for His goodness*, wafting festive air.

Bursting brilliantly as tints and hues of gems’ flare
lights leaping, lilting, skipping in whirling flow
praising God for His goodness, wafting festive air
firmament radiates with celebration glow.

*Psalm 107:31 Oh that men would praise the LORD for his goodness, and for his wonderful works to the children of men!

January 12, 2021
8th place, "2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 7" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Mark Toney; judged on 7/15/2022.

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Sam Kauffman Date: 7/19/2022 1:39:00 PM Beata, love your "leaping lights," "hues of gems," and "bursting brilliant tints and hues!" You have really captured the grandeur of God's magnificence! Congratulations dear friend. Blessings to you on "leaping lights" of grace. Login to Reply

Gary Radice Date: 7/17/2022 5:21:00 AM Beata, I've never put my own poetic mind to writing a pantoum thinking its rules must surely stop the flow and spontaneity of a piece. You've proved me wrong here with 'Firmanent Radiance'. This comes together and works so well. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 7/16/2022 9:18:00 PM Dear Beata, your praiseful poem amazes with glorious imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 7/16/2022 1:08:00 PM Beata, thank you for sharing this poetic display of God's glory, radiating throughout his firmament, and congrats for your win! Grace and peace ~ John Login to Reply

Mark Massey Date: 7/16/2022 7:38:00 AM A vivid display of writing Beata, the pantoum is a difficult style for me…but this one is well delivered. Congrats. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/15/2022 1:37:00 PM A Fourth of July to celebrate and remember Beata. How lovely this is. Congratulations on your great placement. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/15/2022 8:45:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day...................... Login to Reply

Mark Toney Date: 7/15/2022 8:26:00 AM Beata, we are grateful for your lovely Pantoum of praise! Congratulations on your win on Mile 7 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 8 has already started! Login to Reply