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Fireworks Pantoum

Children squealed as others cried and grown ups simply clapped.
A giant Catherine wheel spiralled up and burst in flares.
Most colored pyrotechnics beneath the clouds got wrapped.
The ohs and ahs were heard as the sight dispelled all fears.

A giant Catherine wheel spiralled up and burst in flares.
The smell of gun powder filled the air, but no one cared.
The ohs and ahs were heard as the sight dispelled all fears.
It was a time to feast and cakes and iced beers were shared.

The smell of gun powder filled the air, but no one cared.
Most colored pyrotechnics beneath the clouds got wrapped.
It was a time to feast and cakes and iced beers were shared.
Children squealed as others cried and grown ups simply clapped.


30 December 2020
13 syllables per line
Fireworks Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 11:51 PM
Thank you for participating and winning in Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Victor, everything I was looking for. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Back with congratulations!
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 11:34 AM
beautifully penned Victor, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:36 AM
A fine Pantoum Victor. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
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January 1, 2021 at 6:05 PM
That’s a wonderful Pantoum Victor, you’ve captured the firework display magnificently. An excellent contender for the contest. Happy New Year ~~ Belle
Fowler Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Lovely Victor! Your poem brings such visual and olfactory senses to fore. Good luck with the contest! Have a blessed new year my friend. Linda
Buehler Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 8:13 PM
Your beautiful pantoum is filled with so much pleasant sensory experience. You have done a marvelous job, and this is an impressive contest entry. Good luck and Happy New Year. :)
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December 30, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Victor, this is my second attempt to leave a message on this poem. Fireworks are loved by all in the US. I love your description of them. Best wishes in the contest and hope 2021 brings blessings your way! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 12:28 PM
What an awesome pantoum, Victor. I need to get to work on one of these!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 9:59 AM
I love pantoums the way you love pigeons, but I love fireworks ~* xomo xtra hugs vb
Levasseur Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 9:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this write. Thank you.
Crabtree Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 8:28 AM
I love fireworks. Wonderfully written and displayed, Victor :)
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:44 AM
The sights and sounds you created dazzle like fireworks. Your poem shines in cheerful celebration, Victor.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Very nice! A celebration indeed!
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 4:56 AM
I commented on this one the other day but my comment is not here. That is so strange. Sara..I enjoyed reading it. Reads like a good contender for the contest.
Dome Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 4:20 AM
wonderful and visual. my parrots loved them. my fogs didn't.
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 3:12 AM
You cant beat a good firework display, the ones they have in Florida are amazing. Well written pantoum Victor. Happy New year Tom
Devonshire Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Indeed they are, Tom!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 3:11 AM
Lovely verse about the fireworks... love it. God B L E S S you with a Happy New Year 2021!!!
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