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Fireworks For Me

I’ve been emailing him poems for months at this time Don’t see his eyes shine proud as he reads each line I turn my head to look when I hit a winning home run Always find mom clapping, proud, but alone, in the sun He blows kisses to us each time we get to see him But talking on Skype leaves me empty, torn and grim My heart jumps up each time I hear of a bomb blast “God, let him be safe”, I pray desperate and aghast I’ve been trying so hard to grow up, toughen up like a soldier Just need a pat on the back,weight of his hand on my shoulder Fills my eyes as all celebrate freedom on the 4th of July Fireworks for me,when my dad in uniform returns to us alive. Written on 06/12/2016

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Date: 7/26/2016 1:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win. A 7. A beautiful poem read from you, my friend, bl
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:47:00 AM
Well done Sara, congratulations...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Charlie!
Date: 7/26/2016 8:13:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:53:00 PM
Hey thanks Teddy!
Date: 7/25/2016 10:09:00 PM
Nice :) Congrats!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Kim:)
Date: 7/25/2016 8:02:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thanks dear Laura!
Date: 7/25/2016 7:24:00 PM
This poem is very moving and a wonderful poem to celebrate the 4th. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! Very deserving! 7 ; )
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Connie,I'm so happy!
Date: 7/25/2016 6:27:00 PM
A 7 for this GREAT winning poem, Sara! Janice
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:52:00 PM
How lovely,thanks Janice!
Date: 7/25/2016 5:38:00 PM
What an uplifting, endearing piece. Quite well written, congratulations!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Dineen!
Date: 7/25/2016 5:02:00 PM
Sara,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thanks dear Skat!
Date: 7/25/2016 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for the placement Eve!
Date: 6/13/2016 2:51:00 PM
Awesome sentiment, Sara! I enjoyed this.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/25/2016 2:07:00 PM
Hey thanks a lot Andrea!
Date: 6/13/2016 8:29:00 AM
Strong poem Sara. An excellent take on the theme and a beautiful emotional write. Best wishes for your family.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/13/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks James,its fictional though:)
Date: 6/13/2016 7:09:00 AM
The "reveal" at the end of your poem is powerful, Sara. Excellent poem!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/13/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot Laura,appreciate the encouragement!

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