Fireworks

The fireworks burst above the bay.
Echoing off the mountains around me.
I stood on the cliff watching in awe.
Nothing but brilliant color in the sky.
Life seemed distant, this moment I stood.
Waiting for the grand finale to see.
At the same time not wanting this to end.
While living in a shining moment above me,
Thoughts were ignited below the same way.
This is life. Right here, right now.

Heidi Sands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Williams Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful poem for which I can relate. Thank you for commenting on my I Live poem. Great, Marilyn
Sands Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Marilyn. :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 7:15 AM
I agree w/Andrea wholeheartedly. Beautiful poem, great ending. Love you, lady. RW
Sands Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Freddie. Each moment is so important and to be fully in the moment is truly living! :) I appreciate your view of the poem.
Martin Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Like the "shining moment" above and below. Good poem :-)
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Just got your comment now Mark. Thank you! That puts a smile on my face after a long day! :)
Green Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Beautiful Heidi, as is all of the work I find when I come to your page. I loved this, simple and wonderful.
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Hi Chris. That is so nice of you to say. I just got to see your comment now. It is a nice comment to come home to :). AND Congratulations for being featured on the home page - with your beautiful 1st section of that sequence of writing you did.
Turner Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Nice poem Heidi. Simple pleasures are the best.
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Hi Daniel. Yes..the special simple pleasures. Thank you!
Gupta Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Enjoyed reading ... nice images ...
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Hi. Thank you for your visit. I am happy you enjoyed reading this :)
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Yes, living in the now! Great write Heidi
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 5:37 AM
oops. My comment went above by mistake. I say, YES, thanks Rick!
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