Fireworks

A passionate kiss can be likened to the fourth of July daily.





Contest: Monoku Madness
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Second Place

08-18-16

passionmonoku

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Joseph May

August 23, 2016 at 9:01 PM

Congrats on your win Alexis

Beautiful Scars

August 23, 2016 at 4:04 PM

Alexis, very sweet! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 3:46 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

August 22, 2016 at 9:42 AM

Fireworks for sure,Alexis.Loved the line!

Paul Callus

August 22, 2016 at 9:20 AM

It's a pleasure to be coming back with congratulations, Alexis! Well done! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

August 22, 2016 at 7:03 AM

YES!!! A wonderful monoku Alexis! Congratulations on your high placement. 7 ; )

Just James

August 22, 2016 at 1:19 AM

Great write and great win

Sushma A. Singh

August 22, 2016 at 12:26 AM

Congrats!

Sunita U.D Palawon

August 21, 2016 at 11:00 PM

Congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Eve Roper

August 21, 2016 at 8:50 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Alexis, :) Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2016 at 8:14 PM

I remember this cute one. BIG congrats to you

Ronald Kent

August 21, 2016 at 6:32 PM

Congrats on you win.

Sonia Walker

August 21, 2016 at 6:09 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your placement within the Monoku Madness Contest. What a kiss and so much impact within a one liner. ~ Sonia

Sandra Haight

August 21, 2016 at 5:12 PM

I like that, Alexis! A great way to remember a great kiss! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton

August 21, 2016 at 4:01 PM

Great one liner thanks for your entry!

Alexis Y.

August 21, 2016 at 4:36 PM

Hi John, You held a good contest. Thanks for my placement: -) Alexis

Vladislav Raven

August 20, 2016 at 3:19 PM

Hi Alexis, an excellent Monoku. Such a kiss to die for you little minx you. A wonderful write, i can just picture the fireworks go off as two lover's kiss. A lovely picture it makes too. Beautiful write Alexis. I hope it does well in the contest for you. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lynn Marie

August 20, 2016 at 1:46 AM

So spot on..so good...I love this Alexis :-) A Great Monoku...My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Paul Callus

August 19, 2016 at 1:18 PM

A passionate one liner, Alexis! I could liken this to our annual Safi feast which will be held next week...fireworks galore!! gl in the contest. Best regards // paul