Fireworks

A passionate kiss can be likened to the fourth of July daily. Contest: Monoku Madness Sponsor: John Hamilton Second Place 08-18-16

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Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2016 9:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win Alexis

Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:04:00 PM

Alexis, very sweet! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 3:46:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/22/2016 9:42:00 AM

Fireworks for sure,Alexis.Loved the line!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2016 9:20:00 AM

It's a pleasure to be coming back with congratulations, Alexis! Well done! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 7:03:00 AM

YES!!! A wonderful monoku Alexis! Congratulations on your high placement. 7 ; )

Just James

Date: 8/22/2016 1:19:00 AM

Great write and great win

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 8/22/2016 12:26:00 AM

Congrats!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/21/2016 11:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 8:50:00 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Alexis, :) Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:14:00 PM

I remember this cute one. BIG congrats to you

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/21/2016 6:32:00 PM

Congrats on you win.

Sonia Walker

Date: 8/21/2016 6:09:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your placement within the Monoku Madness Contest. What a kiss and so much impact within a one liner. ~ Sonia

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 5:12:00 PM

I like that, Alexis! A great way to remember a great kiss! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 4:01:00 PM

Great one liner thanks for your entry!

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/21/2016 4:36:00 PM

Hi John, You held a good contest. Thanks for my placement: -) Alexis

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/20/2016 3:19:00 PM

Hi Alexis, an excellent Monoku. Such a kiss to die for you little minx you. A wonderful write, i can just picture the fireworks go off as two lover's kiss. A lovely picture it makes too. Beautiful write Alexis. I hope it does well in the contest for you. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/20/2016 1:46:00 AM

So spot on..so good...I love this Alexis :-) A Great Monoku...My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Paul Callus

Date: 8/19/2016 1:18:00 PM

A passionate one liner, Alexis! I could liken this to our annual Safi feast which will be held next week...fireworks galore!! gl in the contest. Best regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2016 2:53:00 AM

Oh I see fireworks if this doesn't place well Alexis - great one liner:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/19/2016 2:59:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much for such a kind comment. I hope John likes it as well:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2016 1:49:00 AM

that is a yummy kiss!!!