Carrie Richards Poet Senryu

Fireworks

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    one kiss in July

                      lightning fell from the heavens....        
                                                                       
                                                   instant chemistry


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For Francine's Contest
'sensuous senryu'

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Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2011 at 2:51 AM Love really does strikelikelightning, Carrie. The is one of my favorites for the contest. I can see, hear and FEEL it. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick June 27, 2011 at 9:08 PM Oh those kisses on hot July nights...lol. Congrats to you...BG

Wilma Neels June 27, 2011 at 3:01 PM Carrie, congratulations on your win, love Wilma

Debbie Guzzi June 27, 2011 at 2:03 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congrats Carrie on your HM in the contest with this sensuous senryu .. perfect words.. lovely honor.. for excellent creativity luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 12:02 PM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Carrie

Cory Long June 27, 2011 at 10:28 AM nicely done congrats on your win. cory

Caryl Muzzey June 27, 2011 at 10:26 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts June 27, 2011 at 10:10 AM Carrie, congrats on your HM in the contest with this beautiful entry full of imagery

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 26, 2011 at 11:34 AM And *Flash! just like that indeed! That sure must've been some kiss :D! Really enjoyed reading this sensual piece, Carrie :D and thank you for your sweet comments in my backwards poem :) Interestingly enough, when I wrote that poem, it really was raining and waded in the flood, and I was wearing a fuchsia shirt PLUS I indeed had pewter toenails, lol :) and yup, I had my hair down, haha! :D I hope you're having a great day :)

Caryl Muzzey June 26, 2011 at 11:18 AM A wonderful Senryu for the contest, I enjoyed the read. I guess July is the perfect month! Best to you ~ Caryl

James Marshall Goff June 25, 2011 at 7:41 PM Carrie....lighting strikes upon good and "not so good" may God bless you with positive energy! love; jimbo

Dr.Ram Mehta June 25, 2011 at 6:25 PM Hahaha, instant chemistry, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2011 at 4:31 PM Yes, this is senryu, AND sensual with passion mixed in!