Georgia Kereopa Poet Senryu

Firestone

hearts loves firestones 
colliding, exploding sparks
universe alive

Entered: “Sing me a Senyru” Poetry Contest
Song “Firestone” by Kygo and sung by Conrad Sewell
Dated 2/9/19
Placed 5th with thanks

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James Inman October 5, 2019 at 9:34 AM Georgia, this is a new one for me, I don't remember hearing it before. I like it and your poem is so appropriate. The cadence with the words you've chosen fits the song very nicely. Well done. Georgia Kereopa October 6, 2019 at 3:34 AM James, awesome when you listen to new music. Conrad Sewell is an Aussie man from Brisbane. I was fortunate to hear him sing this year and his voice is the same live, incredible talent.

Constance La France October 3, 2019 at 5:11 PM Georgia congratulations on your win in the contest! Georgia Kereopa October 6, 2019 at 3:32 AM Dear Heart, thanks for the opportunity.

Line Gauthier October 3, 2019 at 4:24 PM Congrats on your win, Georgia. Georgia Kereopa October 15, 2019 at 4:47 AM Thanks Line

Jeanne Mcgee October 3, 2019 at 2:12 PM Wonderful words...congrats on your win. Georgia Kereopa October 6, 2019 at 3:31 AM Jeanne, thanks for reading. Always good to hear from you.

Paul Callus October 3, 2019 at 2:00 PM Good choice of song, Georgia! Your words produce fireworks! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Georgia Kereopa October 6, 2019 at 3:30 AM thanks Paul, the music is the star, I merely reflect a nanodot of its grandeur

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 3, 2019 at 9:29 AM This one popped for me. Thank you! Congratulations on your win Georgia. xomo Georgia Kereopa October 6, 2019 at 3:29 AM awww thanks Maureen, I listened to this song constantly when I was doing lappies on the cruise ship.

Kurt Ravidas September 4, 2019 at 11:34 AM Tasty bass in the middle and the end. Alive universe's dancing. GL in contest, Georgia) Georgia Kereopa September 4, 2019 at 4:06 PM thanks Kurt for the feedback. Initially I thought yeah, later I dunno that first line.