Fireplace

I wonder what Mack is brewing today
All I can do is lick the pot
He builds me up higher, my embers, they-
Are smiling cause they know they're hot

I stare at the red sofa he's sitting upon
And at the cat I've burned once or twice
What can I say? The thing knows its wrong
To sit by a fire with ice

I taste a small dripping of soup from above
My flames hiss in the deepest content
With my dancing shadows, I warm as a glove
As I wait for a new log's descent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.
Staton Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Nice poem. Wonderful imagery!
Hicks Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 1:09 AM
You make me want to try this style out! It's incredibly interesting seeing something from the perspective of inanimate object. Extremely well penned!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:53 AM
This is terrific, I have not tried this form, I like it.
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:55 AM
An awesome write with great personification my dear Juli-Michelle! I enjoyed reading it! thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comment on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love and hugs, Leonora
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