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Fireplace

I wonder what Mack is brewing today All I can do is lick the pot He builds me up higher, my embers, they- Are smiling cause they know they're hot I stare at the red sofa he's sitting upon And at the cat I've burned once or twice What can I say? The thing knows its wrong To sit by a fire with ice I taste a small dripping of soup from above My flames hiss in the deepest content With my dancing shadows, I warm as a glove As I wait for a new log's descent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/23/2017 1:35:00 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:32:00 AM
Nice poem. Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 5/2/2013 1:09:00 AM
You make me want to try this style out! It's incredibly interesting seeing something from the perspective of inanimate object. Extremely well penned!
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Date: 12/19/2012 8:53:00 AM
This is terrific, I have not tried this form, I like it.
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Date: 12/12/2012 9:55:00 AM
An awesome write with great personification my dear Juli-Michelle! I enjoyed reading it! thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comment on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love and hugs, Leonora
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