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Firefly Eyes

Flashes of passion Illuminate my path Remind me of my pith So these dreams I not miss

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/22/2022 7:12:00 PM

"Illuminate my path" Yes, they do. :) There is something magical about these mesmerizing little creatures. I have always enjoyed watching them *light of the night.* Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/18/2022 1:59:00 PM

Superb, Dillon. Many people don't know their rear ends glow in their attempt to hook up with a mate. Hmmm..."flashes of passion..." good one!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/18/2022 6:39:00 PM

Yes, I recall catching them in our back yard when I was a kid. Thanks for responding, Dillon. Please call me "Milt," as everyone does. Most importantly, keep writing. You have a real talent, so don't let it go stale!

Dillon Flom
Date: 3/18/2022 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Mr. Hankins! I grew up right next to a park that was filled with them, we used to go out as kids and catch them all the time.