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Firefly

Fiery furnace-filled flames, Fabulously flash-flare; Fantastic feelings flow, Forming flamboyancy; Flirtatious fancies foam, Fabricating frenzy; Freedom flutters fondly...

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Laura Leiser

Date: 10/10/2023 8:22:00 AM

Loving your interpretation of a firefly here, Christuraj! Great descriptive alliteration! Enjoyed this one! :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/10/2023 8:52:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 1:40:00 AM

I am in awe of those alliterations and the imagery you’ve painted in just 7 lines, brilliant pleiades. So gorgeous. I especially loved “ fantastic feelings flow” “ fabricating frenzy” “ freedom flutters fondly” ah so deep and meaningful too. Goodluck for the contest

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/10/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/13/2023 1:51:00 AM

Oh wow, such a glamorous alliterative flow here, I'm absolutely loving these vivid lines here, creating a visual tapestry of ethereal firefly ambience "fiery furnace - filled flames", "forming flamboyancy" Brilliantly done!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/13/2023 2:26:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!