Fireflies Bright

 Little lad finds delight
 With fireflies bright
 He keeps them in a jar
 And they twinkle like a stars
 Each one that he finds 
 Lights up his mind

 He'll watch them all night
 While his dreams take flight
As he drifts off to sleep
 He has nature's wonders to keep

starsrhyme

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/7/2024 1:02:00 PM

Watching fireflies in the night is such a delight. Shining like stars, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. :) The photo matches your words perfectly. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write. As a young child, I also had a jar for fireflies. They sure did twinkle like many stars in a jar. Have a great day with your win..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/30/2024 9:42:00 AM

Hi Joseph, such a cute cute poem - love it Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/25/2024 6:42:00 AM

Those were the days of wonder and enchantment. If only we could keep them in a bottle

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/7/2024 12:58:00 PM

I love those days. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 9/25/2024 4:31:00 AM

A delightful memory Joseph, I remember when I was a kid seeing fireflys and glow worms and thinking they were fairys. Hugs Maria

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/22/2024 1:22:00 PM

Pleasure reading

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2024 1:27:00 PM

Beautiful, peaceful poem. Great one Joseph :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2024 11:11:00 AM

So beautiful and cute! Very fitting for the picture prompt too dear joseph! I love especially “ He'll watch them all night While his dreams take flight” so catchy! Soul warming poem! Best wishes. Sending you light always