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Little lad finds delight With fireflies bright He keeps them in a jar And they twinkle like a stars Each one that he finds Lights up his mind He'll watch them all night While his dreams take flight As he drifts off to sleep He has nature's wonders to keep

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Date: 10/7/2024 1:02:00 PM
Watching fireflies in the night is such a delight. Shining like stars, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. :) The photo matches your words perfectly. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/30/2024 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write. As a young child, I also had a jar for fireflies. They sure did twinkle like many stars in a jar. Have a great day with your win..................
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Date: 9/30/2024 9:42:00 AM
Hi Joseph, such a cute cute poem - love it Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/25/2024 6:42:00 AM
Those were the days of wonder and enchantment. If only we could keep them in a bottle
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Date: 10/7/2024 12:58:00 PM
I love those days. :)
Date: 9/25/2024 4:31:00 AM
A delightful memory Joseph, I remember when I was a kid seeing fireflys and glow worms and thinking they were fairys. Hugs Maria
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Date: 9/22/2024 1:22:00 PM
Pleasure reading
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Date: 9/19/2024 1:27:00 PM
Beautiful, peaceful poem. Great one Joseph :)
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:11:00 AM
So beautiful and cute! Very fitting for the picture prompt too dear joseph! I love especially “ He'll watch them all night While his dreams take flight” so catchy! Soul warming poem! Best wishes. Sending you light always
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:54:00 PM
Childhood is full of wonder. Enjoyable poem brings back memories.
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Date: 9/18/2024 9:41:00 AM
Perhaps this might lull me to sleep with your beautiful verse. You're a great poet.
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Date: 9/17/2024 3:32:00 PM
This is lovely and delightful. You chose the other picture I liked best.
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