Mike Hauser Poet Rhyme

Fireflies

if you and i
were both fireflies
singing to the choir 
light up the night
put us in a jar 
by the bedside
naturally we'd be
a bright night light
you and i
would dance in time
to the flickering beat
of our tail lights
the glow serene 
a wonderful sight
if you and i
were both fireflies

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Kim Rodrigues March 10, 2018 at 7:42 AM Congratulations, Mike, on POTD! Such a beautiful sentiment! You are perfecting your craft all the time, my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu March 2, 2018 at 7:45 PM Hello Mike, this poem is beautifully written. have a nice evening my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 12:57 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d.,Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe February 25, 2018 at 5:52 PM Congrats on POTD! Interesting image :)

Arturo Michael February 25, 2018 at 5:37 PM "would dance in time to the flickering beat of our tail lights" A lovely line indeed...All the best...Congrats

Susan Ashley February 25, 2018 at 5:18 PM Sweet imagery illuminates your wonderful and whimsical poem Mike. Congratulations for your POTD honors with your lovely poem..

Lauren Anne February 25, 2018 at 1:37 PM Great rhythm and imagery. Quirky and playful!

Sakshi Singh February 25, 2018 at 1:28 PM Ooh! I was rapt In your unusual imagination & that must be from a creative & extraordinary brain. Congratz too for POTD

Keith O.J. Hunt February 25, 2018 at 1:11 PM POTD well deserved, exudes youthfulness and a gentle touch, great job with simplicity Mike;-)

Line Gauthier February 25, 2018 at 12:40 PM Congrats, Mike. Awesome pick for POTD. Lovely whimsical imagery. Very sweet.

Jan Allison February 25, 2018 at 11:38 AM Absolutely delightful imagery Mike I am sure you are glowing with delight on POTS, many congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2018 at 10:30 AM I love the image and calling your lights tail lights! Congratulations on having this sweet poem honored with POTD!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 25, 2018 at 7:44 AM My butt is glowing for you! Congrats on potd with this darling little gem. Love it Mike!

Vijay Pandit February 25, 2018 at 5:50 AM Congrats Mike on POTD..kudos for your imagination.

Maria Williams February 25, 2018 at 4:06 AM What a lovely thought, I love this poem. Congratulation on your POTD, so well deserved....Maria

Cheryl Hoffman February 23, 2018 at 5:22 PM A very sweet whimsical write Mike!~Che :)

Heidi Sands February 23, 2018 at 1:42 PM I really love this one Mike. Sweet :)

Sunlite Wanter February 23, 2018 at 12:39 PM Mike, this is a fav for me. So unusual. It could be an old classic.