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Fireflies

if you and i were both fireflies singing to the choir light up the night put us in a jar by the bedside naturally we'd be a bright night light you and i would dance in time to the flickering beat of our tail lights the glow serene a wonderful sight if you and i were both fireflies

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Date: 3/10/2018 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Mike, on POTD! Such a beautiful sentiment! You are perfecting your craft all the time, my friend!
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:45:00 PM
Hello Mike, this poem is beautifully written. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/26/2018 12:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d.,Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! Interesting image :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:37:00 PM
"would dance in time to the flickering beat of our tail lights" A lovely line indeed...All the best...Congrats
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:18:00 PM
Sweet imagery illuminates your wonderful and whimsical poem Mike. Congratulations for your POTD honors with your lovely poem..
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:37:00 PM
Great rhythm and imagery. Quirky and playful!
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:28:00 PM
Ooh! I was rapt In your unusual imagination & that must be from a creative & extraordinary brain. Congratz too for POTD
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:11:00 PM
POTD well deserved, exudes youthfulness and a gentle touch, great job with simplicity Mike;-)
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Date: 2/25/2018 12:40:00 PM
Congrats, Mike. Awesome pick for POTD. Lovely whimsical imagery. Very sweet.
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Date: 2/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
Absolutely delightful imagery Mike I am sure you are glowing with delight on POTS, many congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2018 10:30:00 AM
I love the image and calling your lights tail lights! Congratulations on having this sweet poem honored with POTD!
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:44:00 AM
My butt is glowing for you! Congrats on potd with this darling little gem. Love it Mike!
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:50:00 AM
Congrats Mike on POTD..kudos for your imagination.
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Date: 2/25/2018 4:06:00 AM
What a lovely thought, I love this poem. Congratulation on your POTD, so well deserved....Maria
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Date: 2/23/2018 5:22:00 PM
A very sweet whimsical write Mike!~Che :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 1:42:00 PM
I really love this one Mike. Sweet :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 12:39:00 PM
Mike, this is a fav for me. So unusual. It could be an old classic.
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