Fireflies

fireflies flit around bearing miniscule lanterns~ scintillas of light April.6.2023 A New Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/14/2023 5:28:00 PM

Just catching up.. Congratulations on your first place win Valsa.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2023 2:34:00 PM

Ahh!! I like this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2023 10:02:00 AM

back with congrats. I knew it would be a good winner

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/10/2023 11:19:00 AM

Dear poet friend Valsa, I like the beautiful haiku you wrote because it captures the stunning majesty of the world perfectly. Congratulations on your well-earned first-place win!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2023 6:03:00 AM

So cute…each holding their own lantern…so interesting!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/9/2023 11:13:00 PM

I love the magnificent beauty portrayed in your fabulous haiku my dear poet friend Valsa. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Md Johnson

Date: 4/9/2023 12:46:00 PM

Yes! Tiny flashlights they are. Congratulations. —MDJ

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 11:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2023 8:06:00 AM

Valsa, a sweet haiku, love the imagery, congratulations on your first place win!

Valsa George
Date: 4/9/2023 9:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Tania for choosing my entry for a first place win. So very delighted !

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/8/2023 4:51:00 PM

Valsa, Beautifully described! I see them now . As a young girl we had them flying around our yard sometimes on hot summer evenings…. Magical creatures I will never forget ! Sending love and hugs, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2023 9:30:00 AM

cute one. I love those bugs

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/8/2023 5:18:00 AM

Valsa, what a perfect image you have created here!! Wonderful! Happy Saturday xxoo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2023 1:15:00 AM

That's a beautiful picture you paint, Valsa, a sure winner:)

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/7/2023 5:07:00 PM

fascinating scenery, indeed, i have never seen that, a delicate poem to be read again thanks a lot

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/6/2023 6:49:00 PM

Ive only seen them once in Turkey, I was fascinated. Tom

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/6/2023 12:58:00 PM

Beautiful scenery created in your poem, love the descriptive words, I wish I could have read this when I was a kid, instead of out chasing them with brothers : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2023 12:52:00 PM

- A beautiful light, Valsa :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs