Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Tanka

Fireflies

Late twilight was it.

                              Glanced through the glass window panes

                                      Swarms of sparkling stars!

                                   Seemed drifting down to the earth

                                    For their union with dear ones






Firefly Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul 
Date: 14-03-2022
Placed: 1st

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Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2022 at 10:24 PM I love the line of them compared to sparkling stars. Big congrats. Patri Venkata Ramana March 19, 2022 at 12:27 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Christuraj Alex March 17, 2022 at 4:50 AM "Swrms of sparkling stars" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana March 19, 2022 at 12:26 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.