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Fireflies

Late twilight was it. Glanced through the glass window panes Swarms of sparkling stars! Seemed drifting down to the earth For their union with dear ones Firefly Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul Date: 14-03-2022 Placed: 1st

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Date: 3/17/2022 10:24:00 PM
I love the line of them compared to sparkling stars. Big congrats.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/19/2022 12:27:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the best compliments.
Date: 3/17/2022 4:50:00 AM
"Swrms of sparkling stars" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/19/2022 12:26:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.

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