Fireball

Hugh Maple tree turns
Into a fireball from sun
People need Son's fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Nice Haiku Sara, lovely tree the Maple >> James
Freeman Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Awesome vision, beautiful, and vivid. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 6:09 AM
Amen to that timeless message stated so well in this haiku... what a picture in my mind... great write with few words... powerful message this Saturday.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 7, 2009 at 5:23 AM
good haiku Sara!keep up the good work! :) -------Ell
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