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Fire Star

A radiant view lingers inside my eyes, suspended in the unknown hemisphere of eternity, of pure innocence where its moons and dust alight. I sense the rocks and craters of Mars as one drift. Yet , upon creation's fathomless vortex, there are certainties. While I, an observer in this expanse break into a thrilled stun, as the grandeur of matter and red kiln recall the ways of genesis when chants from gods prophesied, ‘ Star of Fire.’ And each motion of this orb knows its pull before circling amidst outer space. I pause... the novice in me sees all brethren worlds vibrating in a rhythm of fluid continuity. I pause…stirred by this lineage of oneness borne from holy design, roaming to greet friendly strangers in a journey to reach a terminal carrying life’s original seeds. A Brian Strand Contest:
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 12/22/2015 9:01:00 PM
...and back to say well done, nette. Happy Christmas! Viv x
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Date: 12/22/2015 4:02:00 PM
nette, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 11:20:00 AM
Nette, congrats on winning with this excellent poem. Closing stanza is sweetest icing on the cake my friend!!!
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:38:00 AM
Lovely write n win nette.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2015 11:53:00 PM
nette, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on the win... Loved the imagery.
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:18:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write nette! Exquisite work!
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:48:00 PM
From the title onwards, a rich journey, beautifully written, nette. A #7 and a fave, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:52:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:16:00 PM
loved it from start to finish Nette - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:00:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/9/2015 7:24:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 7/2/2015 11:30:00 AM
Nette, this a wow again!!! Ikaw pa!!!~Olive Eloisa.. :D! I;ll see you soon!!!
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:41:00 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:09:00 PM
A mesmerizing look into the heavens Nette. What a great entry for the contest!
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:21:00 AM
Your write is truly decorous dear poet, on the bases of your merit here on the Soup. I enjoyed the journey and love to hear an expanded version of it ! Awesome and also some what prophetic. I sense that you feel a bind somewhere in the lights away. And as for yours truly, I am doing fine ty ! Have a blessed week my friend Nette............much love, james
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Date: 6/30/2015 2:31:00 AM
I have never heard of a "Fire Star" before. It sounds to me as if it is an ancient reference to a Supernova explosion. I will remember that name and do a little research. My very best regards, Nette. :) john.
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Date: 6/29/2015 4:22:00 PM
Reads like a winner.. Way to go for the contest..A planet that seems very uninhabital..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2015 2:54:00 PM
- An outer space full of excitement, a wonderful poem Nette (as always :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:31:00 PM
Talk of ethereal, this eloquent piece brings me a world we surely must belong to. You are a deep poet!
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:31:00 PM
Mars is a true marvel nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:01:00 PM
You pulled me in right from the start, but the last line was totally incredible! Had a stimulating journey with you through Mars' rocks and its universal flow. One of the best poems i have read in a while, Nette.
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