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Fire Star

A radiant view lingers inside my eyes, suspended in the unknown hemisphere of eternity, of pure innocence where its moons and dust alight. I sense the rocks and craters of Mars as one drift. Yet , upon creation's fathomless vortex, there are certainties. While I, an observer in this expanse break into a thrilled stun, as the grandeur of matter and red kiln recall the ways of genesis when chants from gods prophesied, ‘ Star of Fire.’ And each motion of this orb knows its pull before circling amidst outer space. I pause... the novice in me sees all brethren worlds vibrating in a rhythm of fluid continuity. I pause…stirred by this lineage of oneness borne from holy design, roaming to greet friendly strangers in a journey to reach a terminal carrying life’s original seeds. A Brian Strand Contest:
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Wigley Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 9:01 PM
...and back to say well done, nette. Happy Christmas! Viv x
A   Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:02 PM
nette, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
Lindley Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Nette, congrats on winning with this excellent poem. Closing stanza is sweetest icing on the cake my friend!!!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 1:38 AM
Lovely write n win nette.. big congrats!
A  Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 11:53 PM
nette, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
Eastman Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Congrats on the win... Loved the imagery.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write nette! Exquisite work!
Wigley Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:48 PM
From the title onwards, a rich journey, beautifully written, nette. A #7 and a fave, well done. Viv x
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 12:16 PM
loved it from start to finish Nette - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 7:24 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Nette, this a wow again!!! Ikaw pa!!!~Olive Eloisa.. :D! I;ll see you soon!!!
Makama Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 8:09 PM
A mesmerizing look into the heavens Nette. What a great entry for the contest!
Peranteau Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Your write is truly decorous dear poet, on the bases of your merit here on the Soup. I enjoyed the journey and love to hear an expanded version of it ! Awesome and also some what prophetic. I sense that you feel a bind somewhere in the lights away. And as for yours truly, I am doing fine ty ! Have a blessed week my friend Nette............much love, james
Fleming Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 2:31 AM
I have never heard of a "Fire Star" before. It sounds to me as if it is an ancient reference to a Supernova explosion. I will remember that name and do a little research. My very best regards, Nette. :) john.
Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Reads like a winner.. Way to go for the contest..A planet that seems very uninhabital..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work..Sara
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 2:54 PM
- An outer space full of excitement, a wonderful poem Nette (as always :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mara Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Talk of ethereal, this eloquent piece brings me a world we surely must belong to. You are a deep poet!
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Mars is a true marvel nette. Good luck in the contest.
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