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Fire Sign Love

Your kiss is a mystery I want to solve A gift you talk to me and I evolve From my cocoon find me brown but in bloom White wings of love fly me to the moon If you don't fall for me maybe I don't care After all you are my muse with natural kinky hair Cherry challenge a call to trust fate will be shared Love to hear you talk and I like that you stare You are a silver star in my onyx sky each night Even though we are apart together we will be alright You were born in the west and I in the southeast Cupid gives us a timed test that we will pass easy For we are of the fire sign we share optimistic views Both creative cordial kind with empathetic grooves I do hear you when you say I'm beautiful and I feel You see me as you are today so beautiful and real

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/19/2023 3:45:00 PM

lovely romantic poem about two 'fire signs. The rhymes flowed and I especially liked "Cupid gives us a timed test that we will pass easy" Have a wonderful holiday, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 12/19/2023 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Sara. Hope you and Bill have a beautiful holiday as well. Hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/18/2023 4:27:00 PM

Such a romantic poem dear Karen. So well written with great flow and rhyme. Loved reading it and the clever title too. I especially loved the last two lines. A captivating poem of love. So enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you a truly magical Christmas with hugs xx :):)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/18/2023 5:57:00 PM

Christina thanks and have a wonderful Christmas as well as a happy new year!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/18/2023 5:54:00 AM

A wonderful poem of love, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/18/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Jerry.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2023 5:13:00 AM

A very romantic verse Karen, nothing more precious than love. Wishing you a very happy Christmas and good health and happiness in 2024. Tom

Karen Jones
Date: 12/18/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Tom. May you be blessed to have a wonderful Christmas and a happy healthy New Year as well.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/17/2023 7:57:00 PM

Lovely write, my dear. I love the feelings you've created. Well said my friend. Enjoyed reading. May you and your family have a wonderful Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Hugs eve

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 9:36:00 PM

Thanks Eve. Wishing you and yours a blessed Christmas as well and a Happy Prosperous New Year. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 12/17/2023 3:00:00 PM

"You are a silver star in my onyx sky..." Sublime

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 3:38:00 PM

Aw thank you Tom.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 11:19:00 AM

A lovely love poem, Evelyn, so much hope within. Sara and I want to wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Bill

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Bill and warmest wishes for you both as well.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/17/2023 10:40:00 AM

Karen, this is an exquisite tale of love. It exhibited a self-assurance in genuine affection, the kind that endures periods of separation. Outstandingly stated.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 12:28:00 PM

Thanks Sotto!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/17/2023 8:33:00 AM

That's a beautiful love story. It showed a confidence in true love, one which lasts through times of being apart. Very well written.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words Hilda.

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2023 8:01:00 AM

You rhyme very well.. this is sweet and romantic yearnings.. I hope you get to achieve your cravings..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 9:45:00 AM

Time will tell Silent One! Thanks for reading.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/17/2023 6:55:00 AM

Awh, this is such a beautiful write reflecting true connection of love between two fire signs.. Your wordplay is so colourful and splendid with such gorgeous descriptions! "You are a silver star in my onyx sky each night", "From my cocoon find me brown but in bloom","White wings of love fly me to the moon" The rhymes are flowing impeccably here, dear Karen :)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Hiya!

Deb M

Date: 12/17/2023 12:53:00 AM

Awww that is very lovely Karen! Chosen yet? Ha….Debx

Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2023 1:04:00 AM

No lol. I think time will tell! I am in no rush. Thanks Deb