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Fire Rises

Her hands cold like ice Release my desire My passion growing Burning like a fire Tearing of fabric Our bodies exposed Feeling tingling As passion explodes Bodies entangled Joined in every way Rising and falling Two lovers at play Minutes become hours Desire becomes quenched Refreshed exhausted Bodies fully drenched

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/21/2013 11:20:00 AM

:-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2013 11:21:00 AM

Fabulous.....Richard....repost this....More people need to read it.....

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2013 1:24:00 PM

Ummmmmm.....yea! WOW!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2013 2:33:00 PM

I forgot I wrote this one

Don Johnson

Date: 12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM

Poet, you surely are like me, but thats just part of the loving see, passion might just send ya blind, but who cares come back baby mine, serendipity....?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Don, Keep on smilen buddy!