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Fire Pit By Swift Creek

Light dims except in the flames of the ring of fire. Stars shine brighter still Hopes seem possible Ease takes over and washes away the cares of the past week. Swiftly down the current to the sea Fire pit by swift creek warm our hearts, bond our family tightly tonight Forever, eternally bound. Silhouttes appear against the moonbeams Herring, mallard pair, chimney swift Splash....Splash!! Who? what?? Homeward bound leave the night creatures to their domain.

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James Foulk

Date: 4/16/2011 3:52:00 PM

a great write enjoyed reading. thank you for reading a rose fell and for the comment.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/5/2011 12:33:00 AM

Wonderful Doris, love the camp fire theme. also the relaxing feeling you inject to the reader. Harry. Just like to say Doris, when i read some of your comments on soupers poems, makes me smile so, you have a wonderful sense of humour. Harry

Innocent Ododo

Date: 4/3/2011 5:24:00 AM

thanks. nice lines...i can be a flame now

Daver Austin

Date: 4/2/2011 8:37:00 AM

The image and sentiment here are super, Doris. Love the names - Fire Pit, Swift Creek. Love, Dave

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/2/2011 8:11:00 AM

every family has a gathering place where cousins have their fun. John

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 4/2/2011 6:59:00 AM

GIRL-THIS IS POEFREE...WHOSE POEM LOST U-----DID U EVER THINK AT ANY COST-----I DIG GETTING FOLKS LOST?---- U SCRIBE WORDS OF A FAMILY WHO MUST LIVE ON HALLOWED GROUND----WELL I'M LOST BUT PERHAPS BY YOUR WORDS I MIGHT BE FOUND- but actually i'd prefer oxi-contins, roxi-contins and delauded to be my guide, because girl, did it ever occur to you that i just might dig being able to hide? YOURS IN SINNING, NEVER WINNING, IMMATERIAL BEGINNINGS AND peace-Poefree READ MY WORDS & THEY MAY NEVER FIND U

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2011 5:22:00 AM

Inspirational and lovely lines to comfort one Doris... luv the washes away the cares of the past week line .. so intense and such meaning to many luv.. the silhouettes against the moonbeams give this a radiant glow luv..