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Fire Opal Skies - Visual 2

Birds bespeckle  tangerine skies
 As sun meets sea  in waves of gold
  Upon the wind the birds now rise
 Birds bespeckle tangerine skies
 As summer frames the sun's demise
 On gentle breeze beauty  unfolds
 Birds bespeckle tangerine skies
 As sun meets sea  in waves of gold

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2015

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Kim Merryman Date: 6/13/2015 8:57:00 PM Your words paint a lovely picture, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 6/13/2015 8:05:00 PM Back for congrats Joseph...a beauty to be sure! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 6/13/2015 7:51:00 PM Lovely verbal image here, Joseph, with your interpretation of that visual! Congrats on your nice win. And thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats on my poem, 'The Country Road'. Sandra Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/13/2015 6:28:00 PM JOSPEH, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2015 5:39:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2015 12:58:00 AM Irregular meter kept it from getting higher, Joseph. This is just about as pretty as a triolet can get. Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/29/2015 6:11:00 AM Your captivating imagery serves you well, Joseph! Love the tangerine skies! gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 5/27/2015 8:28:00 PM This is wonderful Joseph...sure to shine in Andrea's eyes Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/24/2015 4:12:00 PM That's a stunning triolet. Forever **SKAT** Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/24/2015 3:04:00 PM the imagery is simply delightful Joseph - good luck in the contest - I love the idea of tangerine skies - simply sublime:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply