Fire N Passion

Fire n passion I lived an died an was crucified, and fought with fire an passion, slaughtered, gore n death came for, till we had received our ration :( we held the line on the mountainside, a cleft between two hills, the blood ran down the mountainside, the little pools were filled, but they came again the gamest men, my sword it snapped in two, I caught up another’s broad sword, And the leader, I ran him through, We fought all day, till they went away, It was too slippery to walk, The blood ran down the mountain trail, And the Crows came there, aaark orc. Don Johnson
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Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 12:23 AM
HI DON, PLEASE READ MY LATEST BLOG..IMPORTANT..huggs!
Cayton Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 1:30 PM
I prayed for my native american spirituality to appear on my camera, camera picked up blood running down my face. no joking, we all bleed the same. well written.
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January 18, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Don,,, back again.. this is different and deep.. thank you for sharing..p.d.
Treetop Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 2:37 AM
Excellent work Don. Good on you mate!
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 8:50 PM
VERY NICE ONE, I felt the passion of this brave soul. One of your best, my friend.
Sivey Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 8:48 PM
That about says it all right there Don! A really good write my friend! Awesome Work!!
Roberts Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 8:13 PM
love it, great imagery
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