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Fire N Passion

Fire n passion I lived an died an was crucified, and fought with fire an passion, slaughtered, gore n death came for, till we had received our ration :( we held the line on the mountainside, a cleft between two hills, the blood ran down the mountainside, the little pools were filled, but they came again the gamest men, my sword it snapped in two, I caught up another’s broad sword, And the leader, I ran him through, We fought all day, till they went away, It was too slippery to walk, The blood ran down the mountain trail, And the Crows came there, aaark orc. Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 12:23:00 AM
HI DON, PLEASE READ MY LATEST BLOG..IMPORTANT..huggs!
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:30:00 PM
I prayed for my native american spirituality to appear on my camera, camera picked up blood running down my face. no joking, we all bleed the same. well written.
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:59:00 PM
Don,,, back again.. this is different and deep.. thank you for sharing..p.d.
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:37:00 AM
Excellent work Don. Good on you mate!
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:50:00 PM
VERY NICE ONE, I felt the passion of this brave soul. One of your best, my friend.
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:48:00 PM
That about says it all right there Don! A really good write my friend! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:13:00 PM
love it, great imagery
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