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Written 24th July, 2026 for Tie Dye in July Poetry Contest sponsored by Anthony Bianco

Fire in Winter

July.

cold tightening
around fabric.

cotton clenched,
twisted like creekwater
seized by frost.

white cloth waits
for its undoing.

dye seeps
slowly—
like mist on the ranges,
like breath
through the fold.

indigo first,
deep as a billabong shadow.

then iron-rust,
red ochre,
the colour of dust
after the heat.

then wattle-yellow,
sudden sun
in the gathered valleys.

each knot holds a silence.
each seam marks a boundary.
colour works through it.

outside,
paddocks are stiff in the morning.
frost sketches brittle lines
across fencewire and spider web.

inside,
the cloth will not hold still.

it runs.
it fractures.
it remembers heat.

hands stain
like earth after rain,
like bark at dusk,
like something living
pressed briefly
into human shape.

unwind—

and the fabric is no longer fabric,
but aftermath:

rings like seasons misread,
threads like thaw beginning,
a map of stain and release,
winter stored in cloth.

July loosens.

not the land—
not yet—

but here,
in this small storm
of colour,
winter breaks
into circles of fire.
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Kerr Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Congratulations Alison on your success on true merit and talent. This monumental work scores highly on every poetic mechanism cherished by writers. The role of fabric in temperature portrayal is a testament to your unique style. You integrate cloth into an environmental novel narrative.❤️❤️❤️🔥 Sincere thanks for your review of my latest post. Howard .
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 2:06 AM
Thank you for your warm words.
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:02 AM
The poem's flow is seamless, and the use of fragmented verse gives depth to the portrayal of summer. It's a delight to read; congratulations on your contest win, Alison.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:32 AM
Thank you for your kind words 🥹
Jones Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 10:23 PM
Congratulations on your win! 😊
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Karen ....❤️
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:32 PM
A FAV! <3
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:43 PM
Okay. Thanks for that information. Somehow parallels snow to me... how different, a tie-dyed winter in July-
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Paige, as July is winter here I decided to make July in tie-dye winter themed.
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