Fire In Them Eyes

Imparting methods thru the madness where questions outpace explanation and the winding road remains to be seen I am reaching out to you to push me past the pains of obscurity into the lands of the warmth and the free I like the fire in them eyes as it radiates the resilience, the remembrance, that tomorrow's another day the westward winds will change time rushes and will wonder why we walk along the seashore not letting these moments pass us by

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Date: 10/29/2018 5:29:00 AM
Funny how 2 hearts often have such trouble to meet.
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Date: 10/24/2018 12:50:00 PM
Memories do not experience time and feel as fresh as when they occured. A lovely piece to reflect upon Tim. : )
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Date: 10/24/2018 11:45:00 AM
There is deep sadness in this poem, Tim, and I hope you are speaking from past experience, not something you are going through right now. Sending positive thoughts your way... Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2018 9:11:00 AM
Because time seems moves much slower when you are with someone special and tomorrows are hopefully another day with that person. Nicely done Tim
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Date: 10/24/2018 5:05:00 AM
- Everything changes over time, Tim ... a touching poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2018 7:45:00 PM
Very nice Tim.! Thanks for sharing :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 10/23/2018 7:42:00 PM
A stunning piece you have delivered, Tim. You write so eloquently
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Date: 10/23/2018 7:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend
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