Fire In Them Eyes

Imparting methods thru the madness where questions outpace explanation and the winding road remains to be seen I am reaching out to you to push me past the pains of obscurity into the lands of the warmth and the free I like the fire in them eyes as it radiates the resilience, the remembrance, that tomorrow's another day the westward winds will change time rushes and will wonder why we walk along the seashore not letting these moments pass us by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Vaso Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 5:29 AM
Funny how 2 hearts often have such trouble to meet.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Memories do not experience time and feel as fresh as when they occured. A lovely piece to reflect upon Tim. : )
Devonshire Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 11:45 AM
There is deep sadness in this poem, Tim, and I hope you are speaking from past experience, not something you are going through right now. Sending positive thoughts your way... Hugs, Carolyn
Green Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Because time seems moves much slower when you are with someone special and tomorrows are hopefully another day with that person. Nicely done Tim
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 5:05 AM
- Everything changes over time, Tim ... a touching poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Very nice Tim.! Thanks for sharing :)
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Heidi
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 7:42 PM
A stunning piece you have delivered, Tim. You write so eloquently
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thank you my friend
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