Fire In the Hole

<                                        once there was ten devious children
                                          oh how they did a poor little sin
                                          brother had passed some gas
                                          they lit match to his ass
                                          dam dog was even wearing a grin






Entry For
John Freeman's
Giggle Poetry Contest # 2
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 6:27 PM
haha can just picture it ..congrats Katherine
Fraser Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 6:31 AM
Many congratulations Katherine on your win in John's contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Katherine
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Congrats Katherine on your big win in the Giggles Poetry contest... a super piece my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem..with luv..
Roberts Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 5:39 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
Freeman Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Your "Fire In The Hole" reminds me of the ride at Silver Dollar City Katherine! Congratulations on your #6! Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Well, this one reads kinda dangerous...Glad that I am not there..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner ...Sara
Smalling Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 7:19 AM
All the best in the contest ... your talent will prove you
A  Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 1:38 PM
a pleasure to read, thanks for the read *LUV ~S.K.A.T.
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