Fire Dancing

In Bulgaria, the Nestinari touched me when I was a child
high above the arm to hold, something new and something old.
She said, "Your feet were meant to walk the fire."
A plain proposition I did not understand; I liked the
	acrobats, flying and walking the wire.

She asked my permission and I granted it unknowing
that my path diverged that night, cool coals on the ground and
Early morning on the rise, I see more than just shadows now.
In Bulgaria, we walk the fire and our feet do not burn-
	in twenty-years time, it will be my turn.

In a trance I spin and the music pumps loud,
"Aye dance", faster like Giselle; and sparks fly 
as I kick the soil, embers in the air;
	just putting on a show for the crowd.

The glory of tradition passed into me; the fury and
the light; the cool of a glacier in my core.
In Bulgaria, we walk the fire and our feet do not burn-
twilight to daylight, there are always more steps to learn.

D.Goodman 11-26-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/10/2013 4:28:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Daisy
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:53:00 PM
Hi Daisy , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:59:00 AM
Is for real? I love the way you brought it down, you made me walk through that same fire as i read thank God am not burnt
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/29/2013 12:45:00 PM
Yes this is a real tradition in europe! thanks for your comment!
Date: 11/26/2013 10:49:00 AM
Interesting work about your culture..I have seen on TV people walking on fire but with TV it can be just camera work and not real..I am not that tough..I am a tender foot..Enjoyed reading this delightful work..Sara
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 11:11:00 AM
Thank you! It's a very real custom, recognized by UNESCO. Ancient and pagan in origin, today it has been adapted and Christianized to celebrate St. John's Day.
Date: 11/26/2013 7:41:00 AM
nice flow enjoyed the line "The glory of tradition passed into me"
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thank you! Sometimes I am so nostalgic about where I come from.
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