Kim Rodrigues Poet Rubaiyat

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A difficult contest! I did my best!

Fire Clouds of God's Decision

FIRE CLOUDS OF GOD’S DECISION

O haloed rainbow of precision
At more than 57 degrees of elevation
Brilliant fire circumhorizontal arcs
With prismatic hexagons of God’s decision 

The Creator places those high altitude cirrus clouds
With plate-shaped ice crystals for angel crowds
A superlative fire rainbow dazzles my hazel eyes
Scientific accuracy of season, height and ice enshrouds

3/24/2017
Rubaiyat Form
Fire Clouds Contest

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Eileen Manassian March 24, 2017 at 11:54 PM Seems good to me! Rubaiyat is a beautiful form. To write on a particular theme does make it challenging. The title itself draws one in. Good luck, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 25, 2017 at 7:18 AM Thank you, Eileen!