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A difficult contest! I did my best!
FIRE CLOUDS OF GOD’S DECISION O haloed rainbow of precision At more than 57 degrees of elevation Brilliant fire circumhorizontal arcs With prismatic hexagons of God’s decision The Creator places those high altitude cirrus clouds With plate-shaped ice crystals for angel crowds A superlative fire rainbow dazzles my hazel eyes Scientific accuracy of season, height and ice enshrouds 3/24/2017 Rubaiyat Form Fire Clouds Contest

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Date: 3/24/2017 11:54:00 PM
Seems good to me! Rubaiyat is a beautiful form. To write on a particular theme does make it challenging. The title itself draws one in. Good luck, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen!

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