Fire Brands

with wanton cries of warning
stroke the waning moon
in the tongue licks of bonfire flame

dance oh dance, barefoot upon the loamy breast
of mother,  let swirl within the orb of i
red embers of holy ash

let arms and legs akimbo tilt and rise
to point a beckoning finger to the passing light
milk white upon its sapphire slate 

with wanton cries each man and maid unbraids
playful sirens singing to her opal 
ringed and ringing instruments, shadows

painted the blue-green, black meadow
prancing star-clad round the
bonfire’s flames


*Dear nette i have been missing your moon dances
so I did one for you. I hope you are well and will come
back to us soon.

**This write is a tribute poem to nette's
free verse poem 'Uprooting the heart veins'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haick Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on a fantastic write, Debbie! I love this! Love, Annalise
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February 21, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Debbie, congratulations in Cyndi's contest for Nette, " Netted by WORDS: HER SILVERED, TENDER WEB" :-( sure missing her loveliness around here. XOX~ LINDA
Widjanarko Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 8:26 AM
great poem and beautiful words as always Debbie and congrats on your big win :D, hug, yanny
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 11:02 PM
Wonderful words, Nette wil be so pleased...Seren
Wellington Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 11:09 PM
A mastery piece dedicated to a lovely lady...I have missed a lot, being away. I wish the best for Nette as well. Blessings. Joy Wells.
Chircop Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:08 AM
i always forget the rating but im going to try to remember dear... Thereb it goes
Chircop Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:07 AM
A beautiful poem from sweet ma to a lovely gal.I'm glad you stopped by.Hope you are doing well dear.The little one is nearly 5 months old now.She's sitting on me not letting me type and trying to pushhh the butttooon :0grr ..big hugs
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Only another very good free verse writer could do justice to a free verse poem of Nette's. This is excellent!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..I can just see you dancing with arms akimbo..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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