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Fire and Ice

Ice through my veins It’s crashing with the fire in my heart Pumping fiercely when you look at me Flames when you smile at me Frozen when you smile at her My friend Now my enemy The envy is taking over All I can see is my friend And the man that should have been mine A scream stuck in my throat Fire and ice It’s going to kill me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2010 4:35:00 PM
Jenna, Congratulation on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:54:00 AM
Congrats Jenna on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations Genna, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jenna. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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Date: 3/21/2010 1:01:00 PM
oh i get it now;P thanks alot;)
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:18:00 PM
what feature?;P
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:04:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/18/2010 8:41:00 PM
A WONDERFUL READ I LIKE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE THE FIRE AND ICE...ENJOYED...
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:52:00 PM
Another neat little piece Jenna >> James
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:50:00 PM
thanks so much;) it really means alot; i'm totally new to this;) i will;
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:44:00 PM
enoyed, keep sharing, this poem could fall under free verse or romanticism-form. check out my poems sometimes. :)
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