Fire and Ice

Ice through my veins 
It’s crashing with the fire in my heart
Pumping fiercely when you look at me 
Flames when you smile at me
Frozen when you smile at her
My friend
Now my enemy
The envy is taking over
All I can see is my friend
And the man that should have been mine 
A scream stuck in my throat 
Fire and ice
It’s going to kill me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Jenna, Congratulation on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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March 25, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Congrats Jenna on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie
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March 23, 2010 at 3:51 AM
Congratulations Genna, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 22, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jenna. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
Bird Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 1:01 PM
oh i get it now;P thanks alot;)
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March 21, 2010 at 12:18 PM
what feature?;P
Fisher Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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March 18, 2010 at 8:41 PM
A WONDERFUL READ I LIKE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE THE FIRE AND ICE...ENJOYED...
Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Another neat little piece Jenna >> James
Bird Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:50 PM
thanks so much;) it really means alot; i'm totally new to this;) i will;
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March 18, 2010 at 12:44 PM
enoyed, keep sharing, this poem could fall under free verse or romanticism-form. check out my poems sometimes. :)
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