Aidan Thomas Poet Rhyme

Fire and Dreams Don'T Mix

5 am at your front door, past out from the night before,
Do you find me disrespectful?
What a shame it wasn't your place, I'm such a disgrace,
How could I be so forgetful?
 
I do remember 4 am when the fire still had an ember,
It was then I saw your cute face,
But it seems that it was just a dream,
As I ended up in a fiery brace.

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Beata Agustin March 3, 2024 at 11:27 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2016 at 4:24 PM AIDAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--

Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 6:53 AM nice write Aidan