Fire

From a flicker of flames that spark up, hot and white
Inimitable heat rises up through the night
Reaching out, with it's fast, fiery fingers to take
Everything that lives, breathes or stands within it's wake.


Fire attacks, like a wicked, mad angry demon
It sears, scorching paths that destroy in due season
Firestorms can consume with a destructive passion
Like a wild, unpredictable temper tantrum.

A necessity for life, fire brings warmth and heat
An invaluable source, to cook what we eat
It can bend ore and iron, create what man wills
Whether cars, great ships or guns, for good or for ill.

A veritable force on our earthly domain
Fire's might, in it's grand glory, will ever remain.






Written on 4/18/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/27/2017 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved with this piece !!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thanks, Lenna. :)
Date: 4/26/2017 12:28:00 PM
Lovely tribute to fire,Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. :)
Date: 4/25/2017 6:27:00 AM
Congrats, Laura! Enjoyed!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. :)
Date: 4/24/2017 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your Third placement in the contest. Well done! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/25/2017 12:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, John, for my placement in you contesr! I really appreciate it! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/24/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, John, for my placement in you contesr! I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 6/11/2016 11:15:00 AM
Throwing to the sky falls in sea, double and two ways synonyms. A lovely sonnet my lovely smiling friend. A clear 7 with congratulation. Loved always, bl
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, BL :)
Date: 5/19/2016 11:57:00 AM
I thought I commented on this wonderful piece Laura but I don t see it. You have beautifully expressed the passion of fire. Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:24:00 AM
:) Great write, dear. Yes...we cannot live without it. I think of the horrible fire that is raging in Canada at the moment. I hope that they will get it under control soon. Lovely sonnet. I see congrats are in order. Hugs, dear.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/8/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, sweet Eilleen! Happy Mother's Day :)
Date: 5/6/2016 11:30:00 AM
Greetings Laura. Congrats for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2016 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy :)
Date: 5/4/2016 9:32:00 AM
Congrats, Laura! Great write.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/4/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Tom :)
Date: 5/4/2016 3:44:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my Fire contest Laura! Your poem flowed beautifully with great lines and rhyme! I especially liked "Firestorms can consume with a destructive passion. Like a wild, unpredictable temper tantrum." Great Job and thanks for entering
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/4/2016 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much for placing me in your contest, Brian! I realized I didn't make it personal after I submitted it, but I'm glad you saw it's merit, anyway. Thanks again :)
Date: 5/2/2016 2:20:00 PM
There are those in southern California who understand this very well---well written Laua
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry :)
Date: 4/29/2016 8:36:00 AM
I agree with every comment below. This is a very , very good sonnet... A pleasure to read such creative work my friend.. A7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Robert :)
Date: 4/26/2016 2:46:00 PM
a scorching poem Laura - you are on fire with this one my friend :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Date: 4/26/2016 1:28:00 PM
Clever 12/13-syllable lines with rich imagery and neat alliterations. Well done Laura! Best wishes, Keith
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/26/2016 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Keith! I did notice that the sponsor of the contest wanted a personal interpretation, so this probably won't place...but I entered it anyway ;)
Date: 4/20/2016 12:03:00 AM
I quite enjoyed this, I found it flowed very well, and you made the topic of Fire, a riveting one! Now for the funny part of my comment, just for you! "Hell hath no fury like a woman with a pack of matches"
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/26/2016 1:55:00 PM
HahaaaA! Just saw your comments now.. .have been away from PS for several days. Thanks, Arthur, always a pleasure to hear from you :D
Date: 4/19/2016 10:32:00 AM
Well penned. 7 from me.Very smooth flow from start to end..........with love.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/26/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Manmath :)
Date: 4/19/2016 8:10:00 AM
One necessity that can be good or bad...wonderful write
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, Tim :)
Date: 4/19/2016 4:59:00 AM
had to take me jumper of after reading this lol that looks a good one to me best wishes in the contest stephen
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/19/2016 10:18:00 AM
Haha! Thanks, Stephen :)
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