Fire....

My soul is on fire My mind is alive With the touch from desire Pure mankind inside of me My pulses burn inside to out No poet could write this A teacher of mine in a lesson of two Nakedness through and through A devilish seduction Is driven A passion that is grasped I impel with your intimacy A raging of your thoughts The way your heart opens to mine You unlock a urgency within A timeless moment that we suceed in A freedom to explore our inner fantasys and more The way you say you love me I cherish with all love that is entrusted As our souls burn which radiate the flame we hold

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James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2010 11:19:00 AM

Sizzling seduction flows in this sensual piece >> James

Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/27/2010 7:00:00 AM

very good

John Rhinem

Date: 8/20/2010 11:55:00 PM

Smile ~ "Yes Ms. Passion" ~ "You" have soo much burning inside "Your Beautiful Soul Dear Sarah" that, the object of "Your" desires and loves affections must feel completely joyful to hold such "A Special & Beautiful Lady," within the grips of their own mesmerized hearts ~ As Always, "Spellbindingly Beautiful Poem" ~ "Love & Warmth & Burning Flames of Brightness, to You & Yours, Always," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go....

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/20/2010 8:11:00 AM

babe i just added you to my favorite poets list. i don't know why i didn't do this earlier. guess the blood just returned to me head, just returning from our last dance. still looking forward to the next dance. much luv.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2010 7:26:00 AM

Sarah, it is awesome when some one can uns lock all that, enjoyed,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2010 5:28:00 AM

Miss Thing I love your women fire. You have the greatest way on setting sparks too your poetry. Sarah u just became a new favorite poet of mine *;-) cheers* luv~ Skat