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Looking back when we met I felt so alive beside you We both felt like a puzzle that fit so perfectly There was no I without you Neither you without I "Us" was the best word to describe u n I We were a book I enjoyed writing A poem I loved An equation that couldn't be easily separated Each chapter I wrote with joy Turning a page was easier than one would think Because each page was so great Before I knew it There book needed to it I had wished for it never to end Although deep down we were both just characters Without the book we didn't exist I had know the day would arise Etswe sesafeleng sea hlola I wish we would have been a book that never ended A poem that continued for centuries I wish we were like the sun; That set only to rise more brighter tomorrow

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Date: 9/15/2016 11:24:00 PM
Selinah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:31:00 PM
Lovely first post Selinah,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:32:00 AM
Ooh, romantic! I hope others stop by and read your wistful poem... Welcome to Soup. You can find poems to read on the links to the left of the page. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Cyndi
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