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Finish This Verse

Roses are Red
Violets are blue
Sugar is lumpy
And so are you!

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Debbie Duncan

July 23, 2013 at 2:42 AM

roses are red, violets are blue, the sugar bowls empty,, and so is your head ;} ,,,,,, I see you won with it ;}

Kash Poet

April 10, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Yes The name was written on the sand.Are You here now?

Charmaine Chircop

March 21, 2012 at 7:49 AM

Congrat on your win.Don't forget to share the honey with hubby ,sugar girl

Kash Poet

March 19, 2012 at 7:27 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win.Enjoyed it first time around.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 12:22 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Andrew Crisci

March 19, 2012 at 12:21 AM

A job well-done, Andrea! Congratulations on your win with your wonderful finish. I love lumpy sugar in my coffee, because the more I stir it, the sweeter it gets. Thanks for your kind comment. Have a great day. Hugs, Andrew.

Sara Kendrick

March 18, 2012 at 2:50 PM

Remember the chuckle from the first reading..Congrats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 18, 2012 at 1:38 PM

congrats Andrea on a funny way to finish the verse and a great win too luv.. also luv the other piece posted on this verse.. awesome..

Deborah Burch

March 18, 2012 at 12:20 PM

Congratulations,Andrea, on your win!! this is soooo funny....Nicely done...don't forget to share the "sugar lump"s with your hubby for his help ;) BIG HUG...~Deb~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 18, 2012 at 11:42 AM

Great finish there Andria this so funny, congratulations xx

Black Eyed Susan

March 18, 2012 at 10:04 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Spandan Karmakar

March 16, 2012 at 1:58 AM

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Jack Horne

March 15, 2012 at 4:45 PM

LOL, Great fun!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 15, 2012 at 4:00 PM

I sure would love this to place high, Andrea! So cool how Joe indulged you (hehe, very different approach to the rhyme, really enjoyed this!) and thank you for telling me about Gail's poem-- it was definitely beautiful :) catch up with you soon, ok? Hugs to you sweetie pie! You are sugary to me, and not lumpy...:)

Daver Austin

March 15, 2012 at 11:42 AM

I'll bet hubby got a chewing out for this one. Love, daver

Bl Devnath

March 15, 2012 at 8:32 AM

Inner love comes out with sweet, lovely expression. Best wishes always..., loved, bl

Kash Poet

March 15, 2012 at 12:44 AM

Hmmm...it must be an instant reaction from him....hahaha......I think his sense of humour is great.Before writing any funny poem u should at least ask him once about some idea....

Tracy Edwards

March 14, 2012 at 7:04 PM

Cheeky..I hope you threw a pillow his way Andy lol.. Luvs xxx

Phyllis Babcock

March 14, 2012 at 5:24 PM

Had me chuckling with this one. Yes lumpy these days describes this sugar- holic. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

March 14, 2012 at 11:21 AM

Cute one got a chuckle..Some people just have those lumps all in the right places though..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara

Harry Horsman

March 14, 2012 at 10:51 AM

well it different, and i like it. harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 14, 2012 at 9:25 AM

haha Andrea.. cool and clever one luv.. witty and wild.. good luck luv..

Poet Destroyer A

March 14, 2012 at 9:19 AM

Andrea, , good afternoon. :-) lol..sugar is also sweet... i love your quick verse... good luck in the contest.. , enjoying my time here on the soup today, ..God bless ¤ always PD