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Finish This Verse

Roses are Red Violets are blue Sugar is lumpy And so are you!

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/23/2013 2:42:00 AM

roses are red, violets are blue, the sugar bowls empty,, and so is your head ;} ,,,,,, I see you won with it ;}

Kash Poet

Date: 4/10/2012 1:53:00 PM

Yes The name was written on the sand.Are You here now?

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2012 7:49:00 AM

Congrat on your win.Don't forget to share the honey with hubby ,sugar girl

Kash Poet

Date: 3/19/2012 7:27:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win.Enjoyed it first time around.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/19/2012 12:21:00 AM

A job well-done, Andrea! Congratulations on your win with your wonderful finish. I love lumpy sugar in my coffee, because the more I stir it, the sweeter it gets. Thanks for your kind comment. Have a great day. Hugs, Andrew.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2012 2:50:00 PM

Remember the chuckle from the first reading..Congrats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2012 1:38:00 PM

congrats Andrea on a funny way to finish the verse and a great win too luv.. also luv the other piece posted on this verse.. awesome..

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/18/2012 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations,Andrea, on your win!! this is soooo funny....Nicely done...don't forget to share the "sugar lump"s with your hubby for his help ;) BIG HUG...~Deb~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/18/2012 11:42:00 AM

Great finish there Andria this so funny, congratulations xx

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/18/2012 10:04:00 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 3/16/2012 1:58:00 AM

Wonderful write Andrea liked it- Visit my page--

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2012 4:45:00 PM

LOL, Great fun!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/15/2012 4:00:00 PM

I sure would love this to place high, Andrea! So cool how Joe indulged you (hehe, very different approach to the rhyme, really enjoyed this!) and thank you for telling me about Gail's poem-- it was definitely beautiful :) catch up with you soon, ok? Hugs to you sweetie pie! You are sugary to me, and not lumpy...:)

Daver Austin

Date: 3/15/2012 11:42:00 AM

I'll bet hubby got a chewing out for this one. Love, daver

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/15/2012 8:32:00 AM

Inner love comes out with sweet, lovely expression. Best wishes always..., loved, bl

Kash Poet

Date: 3/15/2012 12:44:00 AM

Hmmm...it must be an instant reaction from him....hahaha......I think his sense of humour is great.Before writing any funny poem u should at least ask him once about some idea....

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/14/2012 7:04:00 PM

Cheeky..I hope you threw a pillow his way Andy lol.. Luvs xxx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/14/2012 5:24:00 PM

Had me chuckling with this one. Yes lumpy these days describes this sugar- holic. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2012 11:21:00 AM

Cute one got a chuckle..Some people just have those lumps all in the right places though..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2012 10:51:00 AM

well it different, and i like it. harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2012 9:25:00 AM

haha Andrea.. cool and clever one luv.. witty and wild.. good luck luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2012 9:19:00 AM

Andrea, , good afternoon. :-) lol..sugar is also sweet... i love your quick verse... good luck in the contest.. , enjoying my time here on the soup today, ..God bless ¤ always PD

Kash Poet

Date: 3/14/2012 8:39:00 AM

Hahaha...enjoyed this funny rhyme very much.Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2012 7:41:00 AM

:) - funny Andrea, well ending. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise