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Finish This Verse

Revenge Roses are red Violets are blue Love once on fire's Now one icy coup ©deborah burch 3/12/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/21/2012 5:34:00 PM
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GOOD one. Congratulations on this one!!
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 3/21/2012 11:15:00 AM
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An intelligent one, nice Deborah.. Congrats on your win!!
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Spandan Karmakar
Date: 3/21/2012 2:01:00 AM
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Congrats on your well deserved win Deborah----
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Kash Poet
Date: 3/19/2012 7:11:00 PM
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Congrats Deborah!Very nice!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/20/2012 12:52:00 AM
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Thanx Kash!! Big hug~Deb
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/19/2012 12:12:00 PM
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Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/20/2012 12:56:00 AM
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Thank you so much Carol, and thank you for all your kind encouragement on all my work an stopping by, taking the time to read it...what a blessing to me...thank you...Big hug~deb
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 3/18/2012 8:27:00 PM
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Hey hey hey! Congrats are in order, Deborah! :) Gwendolen
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/20/2012 12:58:00 AM
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LOL!!! Thank you Gwendolen!! soooo much...Big Hugggss~deb~
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Harry Horsman
Date: 3/18/2012 3:37:00 PM
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first time of seeing this, wonderful ending, congrats, harry
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 4:30:00 PM
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Thank you Harry!!...BIG HUG~Deb~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2012 2:33:00 PM
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Got a chuckle..Congrats..Sara
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 2:50:00 PM
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Thank you Sara!!! You too hun...left you a note :) Huggss~Deb~
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 3/18/2012 1:17:00 PM
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bravo Deborah and congrats on a wonderful write and win luv.. a great ending ..
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 2:52:00 PM
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Thank you, Linda!!! I am overwhelmed!! :D Big Hug~Deb~
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/18/2012 11:26:00 AM
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Great finish there Deborah congratulations xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 11:28:00 AM
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OMG!!! What an awsome honour, Susan...Thank you so much...BIG HUGGGSS~Deb~:D
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 3/18/2012 9:52:00 AM
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Deborah, Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 11:33:00 AM
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OK Susan lets try this again...lol...Thank you so much....what an awsome honour!!!! Hugggss~Deb~
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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 3/18/2012 9:45:00 AM
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Nice one Deborah-Congrats. to you!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 11:35:00 AM
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Thank you Natalie!!!! Congrats to you too!!!!Well Done...Hugggss~Deb~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2012 12:28:00 PM
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Funny to read many versions....of this "finish this verse" Deb. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/13/2012 6:55:00 AM
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whoa cold one nice ending xx Thanks for your lovely comment Deb I really appreciate it , it is a Huge hit with me xx
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Robert Pettit
Date: 3/12/2012 6:07:00 PM
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Nice way to describe a once hot relationship that has sadly gone cold.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/12/2012 6:19:00 PM
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:) thank you Robert...hugggsss...

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