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Finish This Verse

Revenge


Roses are red

Violets are blue

Love once on fire's

Now one icy coup


©deborah burch
3/12/2012

Copyright © Deborah Burch | Year Posted 2012

loveroses are redverse

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Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2012 at 5:34 PM

GOOD one. Congratulations on this one!!

Gautami Phookan

March 21, 2012 at 11:15 AM

An intelligent one, nice Deborah.. Congrats on your win!!

Spandan Karmakar

March 21, 2012 at 2:01 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win Deborah----

March 19, 2012 at 7:11 PM

Congrats Deborah!Very nice!

March 20, 2012 at 12:52 AM

Thanx Kash!! Big hug~Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 12:12 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

March 20, 2012 at 12:56 AM

Thank you so much Carol, and thank you for all your kind encouragement on all my work an stopping by, taking the time to read it...what a blessing to me...thank you...Big hug~deb

March 18, 2012 at 8:27 PM

Hey hey hey! Congrats are in order, Deborah! :) Gwendolen

March 20, 2012 at 12:58 AM

LOL!!! Thank you Gwendolen!! soooo much...Big Hugggss~deb~

March 18, 2012 at 3:37 PM

first time of seeing this, wonderful ending, congrats, harry

March 18, 2012 at 4:30 PM

Thank you Harry!!...BIG HUG~Deb~

March 18, 2012 at 2:33 PM

Got a chuckle..Congrats..Sara

March 18, 2012 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Sara!!! You too hun...left you a note :) Huggss~Deb~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 18, 2012 at 1:17 PM

bravo Deborah and congrats on a wonderful write and win luv.. a great ending ..

March 18, 2012 at 2:52 PM

Thank you, Linda!!! I am overwhelmed!! :D Big Hug~Deb~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 18, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Great finish there Deborah congratulations xx

March 18, 2012 at 11:28 AM

OMG!!! What an awsome honour, Susan...Thank you so much...BIG HUGGGSS~Deb~:D

Black Eyed Susan

March 18, 2012 at 9:52 AM

Deborah, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

March 18, 2012 at 11:33 AM

OK Susan lets try this again...lol...Thank you so much....what an awsome honour!!!! Hugggss~Deb~

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

March 18, 2012 at 9:45 AM

Nice one Deborah-Congrats. to you!

March 18, 2012 at 11:35 AM

Thank you Natalie!!!! Congrats to you too!!!!Well Done...Hugggss~Deb~

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 13, 2012 at 12:28 PM

Funny to read many versions....of this "finish this verse" Deb. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 13, 2012 at 6:55 AM

whoa cold one nice ending xx Thanks for your lovely comment Deb I really appreciate it , it is a Huge hit with me xx

March 12, 2012 at 6:07 PM

Nice way to describe a once hot relationship that has sadly gone cold.

March 12, 2012 at 6:19 PM

:) thank you Robert...hugggsss...

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