Finis'

The thing that mattered most to her was gone
her love for him had been 
wild and unpredictable.
They had grown together into one being
their love beyond words...beyond logic.
She gave all that she was
that most private part of her
to this one man.
Vows were made to love one another
to spend eternity
learning together through life's'  travels
while fending off the evils of the world.
Their nights of love were filled
with much promise and many hours
of blissful happiness.
She was all for him, he was all for her.
But fate had in mind to work against this
deaths call came to them 
as a whisper in the night
catching them both unprepared
it was the one thing never expected
for they weren't ready to accept Gods' plan.
She held him in her arms
through that which was to be 
their last night together.
Mornings first light
was to bring an end
to that which had mattered
the most to her.
With a heavy heart
she released her love for him
to the angels and walked away
vowing never to forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 6/12/2009 8:38:00 AM
What a sad and heartfelt poem, beautifully written>James
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