Finis

4  for Howard

You didn't bargain
for hearts & flowers,
nor hungry little girls
in a woman's body,
nor woods with beer cans
and broken bottles.
I would have devoured you: 
appetite so long denied
it was the larger part 
of me.  You set sail 
on my lake of tears, 
your red sail
confident and bright
against my gray skies.
But, I saw you naked
once or twice--
you cannot 
take that with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 25, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Lines 3,4,5 and 6 absolutely make this poem. I've been there. And not only woods, but bedrooms, all kinds of rooms...in a room, trapped. I've been there with only, maybe, some memory like the one you present. BIG LOVE, daver
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