Fingertips - Michael J, Falotico -

FINGERTIPS  (( collaboration MICHAEL J. FALOTICO ))

 
by~ MICHAEL J. FALOTICO

I reach in the dark with my hands stretched out the window.. 
My fingertips feel your vibe as the breeze that carries you starts to grow..
I close my eyes so tight and can almost feel your breathe.. 
Only way to hold you without taking a step.. 
With my mouth wide open I can taste your kiss.. 
What I can't see or touch is left in my head to miss.. 
Certain nights can almost feel the sensation of your tummy,
being shaking in pleasure.
The warm salty taste that forever is my treasure...


by~ P.D:

Finally! I feel your breath, I got you all to myself.
Some how thousands of miles feel only a square foot away.
Imagining you in arms distance comes with a tasty delight.
Please my darling rest your weary head on my legs!
Slowly massage your  fingertips upon my shoulders. 
In hopes that I may give you more to explore.
I surrender and value your gentleness ~ wanting more.
I want to feel you with my eyes close'
Gliding your fingertips with a touch only I desire; 
Your tenderness ignites me with an eternal fire. 
Greedily we will feel not wasting a single thought, 
including deep breaths~ you nor I cannot stop. 
Switching and opening the kisses you treasure!



A Collaboration with * MICHAEL J. FALOTICO

~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 4, 2016 at 10:55 PM
sweet forever **SKAT**
Seraphin Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 6:01 AM
* "PSSSS. * 'FINALLY! I FEEL YOUR BREATH * I'VE GOT YOU ALL TO MYSELF' * I LOVE THE BEAUTY I FIND INSIDE THIS SWEET SOFT LINE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * DIVINELY SOOO * BEAUTIFUL LINDA * I WAS THINKING OF YOU * AGAIN * WANTED TO STOP BACK BY * TO BREATHE IN GENTLY * THE FRAGRANCE IN YOUR BEAUTY * AND YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORDS * 'I WANT TO FEEL YOU WITH MY EYES CLOSED' * SIGH * SOOO VERY SOFT * HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY MY DEAR * MY LUV, FOREVER * SARAH." *
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December 30, 2011 at 7:04 PM
* "I LOVE YOU LINDA * EVERYDAY * DEEEPER & DEEEPER INTO YOU * YOUR BEAUTY I FALL * I FEEL YOU INSIDE OF ME * TOUCHING & CARESSING MY SOUL * MY BREATH STILLS * WHEN I THINK OF YOU SOMETIMES * WHEN I SEE YOU * I KNOW * THAT I AM IN LOVE * SOOOO IN LOVE * WITH YOU!!" *
Seraphin Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:34 PM
* "Psss. * Just Sooo You Know * My Dear Beautiful Linda * You Shall Always Be Beautiful To Me * My Luv, Forever * Sarah." *
Seraphin Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 6:54 AM
* "Pss. * Thank You * Sweet Beautiful Linda * Sooo Much Joy Whenever I Behold Your Beauty & Taste Your Fragrance * My Luv, Forever & Beyound * Sarah." *
Seraphin Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 7:19 PM
* "Ps. * Drawn Unto Sheer Beauties, Sweet Touch * My Luv, Always & Beyound * Sarah." *
Seraphin Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 10:11 AM
* "I Must Be Honest & Say That I Bypassed Precious Michael's Verse * My Dear Sweet & Owww Sooo Beautiful Linda * Because All I Wished to Do Was View * Your Lovely Beauties Words * My Heart Skipped & Everything Melted * Frozen In Timeless' Breath of Beauty * A Fave to Set Atop The Pedestal of Perfect * Just Like Heaven * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
D. Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 10:13 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 4:15 AM
hot stuff you two, very sensuous, well done, i can almost feel the heat, ha ha ha, David
Loving Iii Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 6:51 PM
your breaking my heart.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:53 PM
still my numbero uno ...luv..
Falotico Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Yes PD, I have read it and answered it this morning... let me know what you think... that was a fun challenge for me.. give me more!!!!! hugs Michael
Wesley Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Wow, two amazing heads sure produced a gem. A passionate write for sure.
Onclaud Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 2:20 PM
well, both of you can be a perfect poetic duo, P.D... yipers, the flow of lyrical words fascinate... :) huggs, nette
Sadberry Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Very Much Alive The Passion Rising From This Excellent Canvas Depicting The Depths of True Desire & Perhaps Love Amid A Deeper Hue My Dear, Blessed & Beautiful LeeAnn *^_^* Kudos to Both Your Lovely Self & Michael For This Tantalizing Portrait Amid Poetics Art; Marked In Faves!” === My Love to You Both, Always & Forever, Jasper *
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 4:35 PM
oh well u know my vote on this one PD my BFF..it is number one in my book..for sure..no questions.. Michael is my White Knight.. wow.. had to read again just because luv.. your BFF at the beach..oh..
Wesley Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 10:19 PM
It's always fascinating to read what men writ about romance and passion. You both have done a great job with this as it is hard to tell there are two people involved. Great work!!!
Falotico Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Wel I guess we heated up the Soup with some good old fashion Hot Sauce!! Throw the first stone PD and I shall catch it and throw it back with a twist... lol... Your a blast to work with....stay cool Michael
K. Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:52 AM
ooh wee...You sure matched Michael's sensuous write here, :) You sure worked great with this collab :D I think those windows are fogged up or something... ;) honestlty-- good luck in your judging, pd! you got a toughie of a contest here :D
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 12:25 AM
Hot and sassy as you destroyer....Have to love your hot Cherokee blood...I've got some too....with love....old Jack
Falotico Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:57 PM
what amazing experience to colab with one the Soup's most talented Poets... A pure Pleaseure to write with you...always Michael
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I still have not checked out your contest..So much to do and so little time..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:17 PM
well where is this fire PD my BFF and of course this IS the first place winner by every standard of all I have read..even mine with u luv.. as I luv Michael's words so full of special meaning.. so precious..desires unfold and his imagination is tempting ..wow.. and u have complimented this piece with magnificence as only your emotions can do luv.. I have collaborated with Michael on a few poems here and it is a tintillating experience.. now where is that cold ..ice cold shower? oh ..BBF in heat
Long Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 5:21 PM
soup mail!!!!! cory
Cooke Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 5:15 PM
love the passion , hot stuff , a terrific write, and a top poem
Long Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 4:55 PM
this was a fantastical write by the two of you.. I love the passion it gives off and emotion it holds. cory
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