Fingertips

Fingertips.
Look at your fingertips they are unique you know
Something we don’t think of, and yet them we grow.

That little pattern in a swirl on the end
Is your own work of art that God on you penned

How amazing it is a tip of one of your fingers
It can bring joy and feel pain, and both may linger.

It can be sensuous, moving in little circles decreasing
To make you cry out, in joy and releasing

It can be warm as you like, as warm as toast
But so cold in the winter, like shaking hands with a ghost

It is sensitive to a degree oh so refined
Tracing round lips so gentle, so fine.

That little swirl on the end of your finger, each line,
You  alone are the owner, and you can say it is mine.

Don’t treat them rough and they will last you forever
They won’t wear out with time, as things you think more clever
 
There is another special thing your fingerprint can do
And that is that they can identify you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/18/2012 12:01:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I have worked in kitchens all of my career Slicing and dicing has taken its toll on my fingertips Are YOU a Cub scout den Leader that went to the Police department with the boys to have thier fingerprints taken When I did it the Boys loved it Some got Fingerprinted Twice I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 9/27/2012 8:46:00 AM
Susan is so right, now we are getting close to the reason why i love your poetry. it is the simplicity of it all, something that many would not even think about, something so vital....
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Date: 11/17/2011 7:19:00 AM
such simple things we take for granted! what made you think of all this? did you get arrested? ha ha ha. i am looking at my fingertips now, wondering what they say about me...maybe you need a 2nd poem about that. i used to have an old palm reading book and i think it had info like that. maybe i'll dig that up :) how are you enjoying the soup?
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/17/2011 9:30:00 AM
Ha ha , no I haven't been arrested, we were in the Jaquzzi and had been there a while and I was rubbing my fingers together wth hand cream when i got out and thats when i thought of it. xx
Date: 11/16/2011 11:13:00 AM
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