Fingerprints and Heartprints

Our fingerprints leaves our identity
On walls, doorknobs, books, all around
Each touch an impossible escape
Challenging me to face each reality
Compassion and kindness be abound
As good heartprints, my great break

Thus, they can never be use as "mask"
To disguise my fingerprints' touch
To a daughter, friend or neighbor
Hence, when someone there dares to ask 
Even obviate to commit a prejudge
Real love heartprints - my labor

Our fingerprints leaves our identity
Thus, they can never be use as mask

by 
olive eloisa
2:00 AM
04/07/2014

CONTEST: ANY POEM #22
SPONSOR: POET DESTROYER A
7TH PLACE

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/10/2014 11:34:00 AM

Hi Olive sorry for the typos, I'm on my tablet and it does what it wants sometimes.. Meant to type Thank you~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:58:00 PM

no probs.. :) thanks much

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/10/2014 11:32:00 AM

Hi Olive, I loved this write. Very unique and tender. Thank for sharing this write with us. Congrats on your win:) Thanks for stopping by. Peace, Deborah

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:58:00 PM

Thank you very much dear.. :) your so generous with your comments.. :D

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2014 9:14:00 PM

OLIVE, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:57:00 PM

Thank you sweet pretty Skat... :D

Paul Callus

Date: 4/26/2014 5:26:00 AM

I love this poem Olive_eloi. (somehow it escaped my attention before!) Whatever masks we wear, our fingerprints will for ever give us away! Congrats on the win. :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/27/2014 4:03:00 PM

Thanks much Paul.. :) i always welcome your constructive comments,, :)and encouraging remarks.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2014 1:21:00 AM

Hi Olive, , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2014 3:07:00 AM

Thank you Linda.. :) I hope though next time I can grab a higher one.. :)

Ivor Kos

Date: 4/26/2014 12:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Guillermo! Mr. Callus is 4th! You're both superb poets.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2014 3:05:00 AM

Thank You Ivo:) Praise be to God as always.. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/7/2014 7:58:00 AM

The true and everlasting heartprints are those imprinted by the actions of our unconditional love! A wonderful analogy! Great message my dear friend olive Eloisa!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 9:23:00 AM

Thanks too.. :) I think you exemplified this.. :) to God be the greatest glory..:)